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fuckoff 
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 Topic: [Audio] fuckoff v SwordedStylezPosted: 02 July 2014 at 12:06am |
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1-2 mins
no lyrics/text topic- personification of a colour boommmmm. ill drop tomorro sum time saaafe
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fuckoff
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Posted: 04 July 2014 at 11:39pm |
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 9:54pm |
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https://soundcloud.com/swordedstylez/ss-vs-fo Yo man sorry this took so long, finally got chance to record. Yours was ill as fuck, we need to collabo. |
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ch3kkgame
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 2:07pm |
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This was a good battle. Good as hell.... how I see it
Fuckoff - your flow was ok, your multis and rhyming patterns were on point though. It was just the way you packed it into the kicks in the beat. Kind of threw the flow off in places and chopped it in some. The lyrics were most def where they needed to be. Overall solid drop though. SS - your flow was on point as well as your multis and rhyming patterns. You sounded aggressive and from my style of spitting I like that a lot. The emotion has to be there. I enjoyed the lyrics and since the flow was on point I could hear all of them. Overall great drop. Based off flow, delivery, lyrics, and aggression. I have to go with SS. This was a good battle though. |
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Ransom
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 8:08pm |
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Man this is a Hard one to call.. I listened to both audios 3 times...
Mr off - I thought you were vivid in your verse and rode the beat nicely.. A lot of deepness and some nice multis there... I thought the delivery was spot on for the beat you used.. so over all it was decent Sword - You had a strong delivery and your multis was also on point.. you got off the beat a little bit with the snow face line.. Flow seemed a little rushed at times.. other then that you were spot on.. Vote: I was so close to calling this a tie, both guys had amazing effort on this topic.. but I gotta vote for fuckoff.. He was just more vivid and on a topic post that was the most important thing.. Good job to both of you
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The Law
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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 9:31pm |
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Fuckoff - First off, the loved the beat you used, just listening to it right now in the beginning as it builds up is very nice. Your flow and rhymes were on point, but I thought you delivery was lacking a tad bit, there were spots I had to relisten to a couple times to get what you were saying. From like 1:40 and on you went off and it got really good from that point to the end.
Sword - Flow, multi's, delivery, aggression was just straight fire in this. There were a few parts I though you messed up on either just spitting or your voice was too loud for the track. I believe that happened in the beginning. But as far as the audio categories of this battle, you took it in all cases. You are very comfortable on the mic and spit your lyrics well. MGVT: SS - It was a very close match. Both excelled on different parts of this battle. I thought FO had the better lyrics for this topic, he was more and on topic and creative as far as that goes. But on the flip side of the audio battle, I thought SS just killed it on the mic. If this was a text battle, it would have went to FO, but so much more goes into an audio battle that you have to account for besides just the topic and lyrics and in that case is where I think SS edged it. Great battle. |
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barrybondz
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Posted: 18 July 2014 at 4:05am |
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Fuckoff - You are a good writer but I just didn't feel this beat paired with your voice personally, its almost like the beat drowned you out in some parts and I couldn't hear you as clear as I should. A gain maybe? Either way you are definitely one of the better audio heads on here and even battlers. You have a good voice on the mic, but like any battle it comes down to overall performance quality.
SS - Haha right off the bat it was just like pure aggression man with little breaks. I don't know why this just connected with the listener so much better than fuckoffs. I can't speak for everyone obviously but me personally your track just sounded way better to me and I think its exactly what law said its just your flow on the mic is brilliant. I think this battle purely comes down to ones taste because its really that close and to me it just seemed like fuckoffs was drowned a bit to my ear. Vote=SS
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H4ZE
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Posted: 19 July 2014 at 12:22am |
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damn, this was a great battle, I really enjoyed listening to this.
FO, you killed this, the way you went at the topic, it was vivid, you went deep, had some nice multis as well. Flow was dope and I think your delivery fit the beat perfectly. Really enjoyed this track, great shit. SS, this was dope as well, dope delivery, flow and rhyming as always. You came at this topic in an interesting way as well, love the aggressive delivery. Overall, this was a dope battle. Really close imo, hard to chose between the two tracks because you both did so good. I think I'm gonna have to go with FO though. He was more creative with his track, more vivid and deep and I loved his delivery over that beat. Really great tracks from both. MVGT FO
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solidbars
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Posted: 19 July 2014 at 7:17pm |
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Fuckoff I as well like the beat, I like the lyrics your delivery was not consistent though and that is the whole point in My opinion about doing audio battles. You had some punches they were not bad, that delivery just killed them for me. If you work on that delivery you would be a top competitor for real.
S'S you had the whole package here. Loved the passion of Christ line. Rhyming was just sick here. Top notch, delivery and flow, punches all great here. Hands down SS takes this one. From all this stated above. I vote for SS
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 27 July 2014 at 12:48am |
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Bump for votes, been open a while now.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Rapper T
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Posted: 28 July 2014 at 7:47am |
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Both had a dope verse and clean vocals, SS was slightly more in the pocket with his vocals and was clearer to understand with enunciation. That said the reverb FO on the mic had a really cool effect with the beat that was chosen, he was just as close to being vocally connected to the beat and sometimes I prefer to hear a more cryptically written verse or harder to understand verse so I liked that about the writing but for clarity that had to go to SS. Both angled at the topical in a really cool way, it was like a lot of poetry I grew up writing about colours and associating them with descriptors to help them be tasteable and visible etc. in the minds eye. Props to both for the lyricism. Flow from each was good too, though SS edged FO out slightly in the flow but both as I said earlier flowed good and both were in the pocket right the verses through
Had to re-listen to fuckoffs vocals twice to follow the words which wasn't just an accent thing as SS was clearly understandable on the first listen. fuckoff did bring a really enjoyable sound to his verse, I had to concentrate to understand through the accent to clearly hear what was said in the verse and both touched on personification of colour really well as a topic. SS explored a description of more colours more descriptively in this topical which as a topical battle that the flow and beat and quality was all really similar in, the creativeness of the description had to go to SS for me. I have to say I thought SS said 'I'm the' a lot which could have been more creative but it worked as a style. Both really dope drops and really enjoyed both but only edged out in this battle MVGT Sworded Stylez
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 28 July 2014 at 3:27pm |
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5-2 to me, can another Mod close this please?
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 30 July 2014 at 8:12pm |
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Locked to prevent further post-win comments that are irrelevant to this TOPICAL battle. Chasestackz, learn to read.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 05 August 2014 at 8:34pm |
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5-2 to SS
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