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barrybondz
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Joined: 09 June 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1440 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
Topic: [Audio] Barrybondz vs ElitePosted: 19 July 2014 at 6:25am |
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You want disrespect ill give you disrespect
1min to 1:30 runtime. Houserules and no flips |
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Elite
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Joined: 16 February 2014 Location: US Status: Offline Points: 3340 Crew: eNtiTy Audio Rank: #3 Stats: 5-0-0 Form: WWWW |
Posted: 19 July 2014 at 1:59pm |
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lmao. whatever bruh, lets see it then.
Check.
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barrybondz
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Posted: 19 July 2014 at 9:52pm |
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Elite
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Joined: 16 February 2014 Location: US Status: Offline Points: 3340 Crew: eNtiTy Audio Rank: #3 Stats: 5-0-0 Form: WWWW |
Posted: 19 July 2014 at 10:07pm |
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Dougysnuggy
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Joined: 24 June 2013 Location: Click on that v Status: Offline Points: 1972 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-11-5 Form: NWWWWL |
Posted: 19 July 2014 at 10:16pm |
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Lolllllll.
Well. . . Barry, your verse had literally no flow, you sounded completely off beat, and the delivery to this was just nonexistent . The personal attacks were really just failed attempts. They weren't really even personals, most of your bars were just filler . No creative punchlines, nothing at all. You need to focus on actually saying something. Elite, your verse was miles better than his, the beat was more original , and you actually flowed with a decent delivery. you actually had some personal attacks, and sounded like you actually knew what you were doing and saying, whereas he was kind of sloppily spitting below average bars. All in all, Elite easily took this. He had the better everything. Barry, you should go watch some battles... mvgt elite
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The light-worker
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Joined: 07 July 2014 Location: with the stars Status: Offline Points: 57 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
Posted: 19 July 2014 at 10:29pm |
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BAZ ermm ha don't quite no what to say that was funny but not in the best of ways you tried comedy it did you no favours voice irritated the fuck out of me and your punchies where corny try another style
Elite enjoyed listening to your drop you where funny for the right reasons you flowed well but at times you sounded mumbled remember to be as consistant as you can through out MVGT Elite
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SwordedStylez
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Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
Posted: 19 July 2014 at 10:55pm |
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Barry - flow is crazy, and htat nerdy delivery sometimes works sometimes doesn't work. You went pretty personal though, worst in HG, n-bombs, dickriding H4ZE, headset, fat kid, haha the wrestling one was funny, haha mom's wage was funny, the I quit speech was bang on the money. ALl in all pretty personal actually, flow was shaky and no complicated rhymes really, oh and the smacked up sister was raw.
Elite - Beat choice is kinda cool, I like the ambient style. Flow's better than the last one of yours eye heard. You've got nice rhymes but you've got very few punches. This is more like a diss track, but you focused entirely on him being an Eminem fan. There was very little beyond that, the beat by flame is a weak personal. Overall Elite murked barry in flow and rhymes, but this is a battle and Barry hit him with hit after hit after hit. If Elite woulda had more variety in his punches and done more of a battle than a diss it woulda been his. Barry was weak technique wise but every couplet had a punch even if they got weird at the end. And tons of personals. My vote - Barry.
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barrybondz
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Joined: 09 June 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1440 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
Posted: 22 July 2014 at 8:29pm |
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D.Von Doom
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Joined: 18 June 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1534 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 15-4-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 22 July 2014 at 9:51pm |
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Interesting battle guys
Elite-great beat selection,your sounded like you reading at certain points. Good lyrics but you didn't get personal. And it's hard to find a decent punch. but your confidence on the track mos def made it a drop to reckoned with. Barry- Beat selection was ok....but your bars made up for it.Your delivery needs some work..its like you squeeze too many words in a bar. you sometimes come off beat. on another hand you were wayyyyy more personal and funny. I usual don't like jokes in a battle but you were more direct. so im going with..... >>>>>>>>>> Barry <<<<<<<<< |
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 24 July 2014 at 8:19pm |
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barry - Delivery was a little better in this one than the other audio I listened too because you slowed it down a bit and I didn't have to do the listen to it over and over again to catch what you said. It was much clearer in this one for me anyways. I thought the punches were up and down, you had some good personal punches and there were others that were generic in my eyes, because they weren't true personals against elite.
Elite - Flow started off slow for me, about 18,20 seconds in really started picking up. I really liked your flow and delivery though, it could still use some more work because it's not perfect but it has a ton of potential. I thought you had some dope personals, marshall mathers impression line was cool, but you got repetitive with that using your closing bar about the shady impression again. Martyr of the mic punch was cool as well. You did have some filler in there though. I would to see more consistency and personal agressision. MGVT: Elite - Punches in this one again go to barry bonds, but elite had a few nice ones himself. I skimmed through the votes, And he dominated the battle in flow, schemes, and delivery in my opinion. Barry still has some work to do to pull off his delivery. |
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barrybondz
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Joined: 09 June 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1440 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
Posted: 29 July 2014 at 2:05am |
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bump..
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Ransom
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Joined: 30 June 2014 Location: 7 Citys Status: Offline Points: 911 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-0 Form: WW |
Posted: 29 July 2014 at 9:46pm |
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Im in complete agreement with swords...
Elite - you rocked it homie.. better delivery, and multis all the way around... by sound alone you aced it man Barry - You were barry, lots of jabs, tons of personals and still reading your verse of post its lol.. Overall this was a battle and I thought Barry came off to hard with his jabs to not make up for his lack of delivery.. MVGT - Barry REMATCH!! REMATCH!!
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barrybondz
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Posted: 06 August 2014 at 9:31pm |
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JBrenn
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Posted: 13 August 2014 at 8:24am |
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This was a hard one.... i feel like bb came with RAW PUNCHES he said fuck flow fuck mic presents and just swung at elite in every single line... he wrote bars for elite plus he rapped 90% of the clip...
Elite let the beat ride to much and only came with a few hits here... Barry wins this because its a battle still and punches count... and personals and the CLOSER WAS HILARIOUS!!!!
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fuckoff
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Joined: 10 April 2013 Location: fucksville Status: Offline Points: 3074 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 27-6-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 14 August 2014 at 12:03am |
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barry, your flow is alot better than on the last i heard, but your off beat mostly, its like a mad rant. you were punching, but imo its completely let down by your delivery
elite, vocals a lil quiet, your presence needs to be stronger, it doesnt fit with your lyrics, theres argression in the words and not in your voice, you grew into a little and finished better, the shady lines were decent its close, punch wise but in all was one sided IMO elite gmv elite GMV |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 17 August 2014 at 8:53pm |
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Barrybondz
Your style on the mic is really odd man but it seems to work for you. You obviously have a lot of charisma, but at the same time I don't think you're using your voice as well as you should be in a rap battle, it's like up and down all the time and you have this 'matter of fact' tone of voice. Try and spit aggressively like you're pissed off. As for the content of your verse, you had a few decent personals in here but there wasn't that much killer material that really stung Elite. Decent drop though Elite Your delivery is much more suited to rap battling than barrybondz is, you rode the beat well and I think your lyrics were pretty good, you clowned him on his voice and previous battles where he said he was buttfucking himself (!), your delivery was a lot more aggressive and I think you did really well here. Verdict As I'm judging this as an audio battle I think I've got to give this one to Elite. Both have potential to be a lot lot better than they currently are. Barry, your recordings are really clear and your lyrics aren't too bad, it's just the way you actually spit your verses on the mic that is holding you back. Elite was a lot more aggressive and put more meaning into his bars and I got to go with him. MVGT Elite
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 17 August 2014 at 8:55pm |
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5-4 Elite Wins.
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