Audio Battle Archive: [audio] D.Von Doom vs Mission (5-1)

checking in. challenge accepted

https://soundcloud.com/daofficial1/doom-dumb-it-downmission-diss

Since we are posting lyrics...
Expo:
1. "It's a rap for you hero" (gyro is a wrapped sandwich and is pronounced hero)
2. "He's no competition, no need to add a poll/what i wrote is Adipose meaning he could get exposed with the CAL(calicoe=gun) or we talking bout calories..you still diet seems"(Health scheme, adipose means "fat",cal or we talkin bout calories <wordplay> , you still diet it seems [you still die it seems]
3."you made a grave mistake...3rd shift" (3rd shift is called the graveyard shift)
4."All this work I put in for war, me and my 4 creepin thru fort like greeks in a Trojan horse"
(Mission is from fort worth, and the greeks used a trojan horse to infiltrate Trojans fort)
5."N Im Proper ill put this Prop in the E.R"(self exp)
6."Thinking he lyrically meeting me or He just mistaked a rock for a meteor"
(saying mission is having illusions that he can match me lyrically a rock vs a meteor)
7."Ima kill em awful too or u can call it college Cuz This schooling is gone cost you"
(cself exp)
8."Tuition for the victim that went missing On that mission tom cruise had envisioned"
(adding to college/school bar...saying mission's mission he recieve aid is impossible, Tom Cruise was the main character in the movie Mission Impossible)

____________________________________________________________________________
Its a wrap for u hero(gyro)
I like to play the villain
Your mission has brought u
Into a burning building
Mission on dope.. how high he feeling
You blowing smoke with no chimney on the ceiling
Hes no competition no need to add a poll
What I wrote is adipose
Meaning he could get exposed
With the cal or we talking bout calories
U still diet seems (die it seems)
Ask Kermit y he want it with wordsmith
U made a grave mistake, 3rd shift

What's da mission statement for
All this work put in for war
Me and my 4, creepin thru fort
Like trojans in a wooden horse
Shoulda listened I'm da best mortician
They got me dressing a corpse
Of course its unsportsmanlike
The mission is to avoid games on the mic
Now I'm licensed as the nicest thus far
N im proper ill Put this prop in the er
He's confused by the shooting stars
Thinking he lyrically meeting me or
He just mistaked a rock for a meteor
This plots like cb4, spit hot like the oven door
Ima kill em awful too or u can call it college
Cuz This schooling is gone cost you
Tuition for the victim that went missing
On that mission tom cruise had envisioned
U can keep ya music no need for anymore drake re-enditions
Fake and phony ya religion
Ill stop the ya heart from running
Like its holding scissors


Edited by Shankley - 09 November 2014 at 3:44pm

Mission - Your confidence on a mic is great. You flowed well on this diss. Also liked the different style of flow you used for this battle. You used good wordplay and some tight metas in this. If only one thing I would have to say that the flow was off in some parts

MVGT D. Von Doom

I dunno if this battle is over but I felt it was really one sided. D-Von had the better flow, delivery and beat. neither had anything astounding lyrically. so far as the "audio" aspects...it wasnt even remotely close. id give mission the mixing end but that dont mean shit when your flow is rushed, youre monotone and rapping some struggle bars. hope both yall keep doing you tho. best of luck.


vote = D.Von by landslide.

Pretty one sided battle for me. Mission, you had some nice lines but it was mostly outshined by your stumbling flow and the sound of you drastically needing breath. Beat selection is aight, but it seems more like a beat you'd use for a club song than for a battle. Overall your shit was alright, nothing too special, I've seen better from you. Stay up.

Mvgt von doom - Both came in nice and it wasn't a poor battle. Mission, your delivery speed and all that is impressive but it underminDs your lyrics in  a battle. There were some okay punches and some decent word play but slow it down, quality over quantity. Check you had this one down, your punches wwere better but coould still be improved. You had presence and drove your lines home clearer and in the more effective manor. You seemed the more natural battler.