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IZIAH 
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 Topic: (audio) IZIAH vs D. Von doom (0-3)Posted: 06 November 2014 at 3:40am |
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2 minutes or less
due in 3 days after check no flips rest house rules good luck man, check |
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~Insight The Inspired~
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Posted: 06 November 2014 at 3:51am |
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IZIAH
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Posted: 06 November 2014 at 5:18am |
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~Insight The Inspired~
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 06 November 2014 at 5:55pm |
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https://soundcloud.com/daofficial1/doom-iziah-diss
Caught a cold yesterday so my breath is shorter, goodluck The only expo i think is needed is that Isaiah was a prophet in the bible and was believe to have received salvation |
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Posted: 06 November 2014 at 6:07pm |
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Ok Izaiah, first off, im sorry, but ur aggression sounds so fake. Its like ur trying to sound aggressive, but really not saying anything aggressive at all. You had a good flow, and a great rhymescheme, but I only felt u landed one or two good punches. I loved that "duck my dynasty" line. Not sure if these UK people will get that line though. "ur name is doom? well ur day is doomed", that was some bullshit bro. No creativity at all. I almost stopped the track right there cuz u sounded like a 5 year old. Overall good flow but not many good punches.
From the start you had a calm presence ont he mic. A decent line on the prophet thing. But this bar right here got me "He should give a rest like he's cop resisting". Thats pure genius. I like how u used the goliath metaphor and kept that for a few bars.The ending line is sick as well. For better mic presence, and better punches, MVGT: D Von. Doom |
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Posted: 08 November 2014 at 6:44pm |
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Posted: 08 November 2014 at 10:26pm |
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Iz - lyric wise wasnt aweful, but you dont sound like you really believe the words your sayin kinda. Gotta get a deeper and more believable persona with dat presence. the presentation of the lyrics left them not hittin as hard as they could
Doom - a lot of your wordplay was kinda played, but you pulled some of those bars off with your aggression. I feel acapella was the better choice here since it focuses on the lyrics more. feel you were more direct, just stuff like arrest/a rest has been done a million times, would be nice to see ya get a bit more creative +1 Doom, one sided imo
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Posted: 09 November 2014 at 11:07pm |
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Posted: 25 November 2014 at 2:24am |
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IZIAH:
First of all your flow was forced and it really took away from your verse overall, you did alright though.. You had some decent punches but they weren't consistent and hard hitting, not to mention some of your personals were a bit of a stretch. This was a close battle, had you connected with some better punches you could've taken this. D. Von Doom: For not having a beat you did a good job with your flow, you had decent setups and punches throughout. I felt as though you lacked alot of personals however you did connect well on the ones you dropped and because of this, I gave you the win. MY VOTE GOES TO: D. Von Doom
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Posted: 25 November 2014 at 7:19am |
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Doom wins by ko
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