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IZIAH
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Topic: (audio) IZIAH vs Young D (3-0)Posted: 29 November 2014 at 10:05am |
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2 mins max
3 days to drop house rules good luck man |
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~Insight The Inspired~
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IZIAH
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Posted: 29 November 2014 at 11:43am |
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~Insight The Inspired~
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Young D
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Posted: 29 November 2014 at 11:51am |
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How do you get that to show on the post?
when I do it, there is only a link?
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Young D
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Posted: 29 November 2014 at 6:41pm |
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Sorry just going to have to post a link. I aint been sleep for two days and I can't figure out how to embed it. -Young D Edited by Shankley - 01 December 2014 at 9:20am |
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Grimeeeeeeey |
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Young D
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Posted: 29 November 2014 at 6:42pm |
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fucked it up BIGTIME...it's the second link :)
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Shankley
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Posted: 01 December 2014 at 9:35am |
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Both o ya when ya have 2 mins use the time both of ya bearly got over a min it, it's like dropping half bars in a text battle your not utilising the time allowed.
z: a decent verse you had some personals in there and yu had a nice flow. You didn't have much in the way of punches you had the basis of some nice punches but didn't make em hit. That aside you done good bro. YD: You had good flow but you concentrated too much on his "mum" am I wrong or is it Iziah your battling and not his mum? You need to be more direct in your attacks, "Yo mama" shit does not work bro they are way too played out be more creative and attack the person you're battling. You had some nice multia and great flow but battles are all about punches. MVGT Iziah for attempting punches against his opponent and having some personals. |
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Posted: 01 December 2014 at 11:48pm |
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Iziah-
This is the best I've heard from you. You had personals and punches that related to your opponent. You should have utilized more of that 2:00 MAX to get more angles at your opponent. Since you've got being direct down now just need to put more emphasis on your punches and get that flow air tight nice drop vs. Young D- You are pretty good with audio but you weren't direct. You can have flow, multi's and punches but if those don't translate into attack your opponent then you can't win. your momma jokes are elementary..one or two would have been fine but that was your entire drop. still good work flow keep getting better MVGT:IZIAH |
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Posted: 02 December 2014 at 12:24am |
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Iziah- Ay I like tha aggression and the attempt to punch at Young D, even tho y'all half ass'd it, I give u more props for coming at your opponents head and treating this more as a battle than a rap off.....good verse
Young D- I mess with your flow but you could of came at iziah head more, you sound lie you was reading from a notepad and that verse you coulda saved for "audio mic" word of advice from experience that's not gon cut it on this site MVGT: Iziah
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Posted: 02 December 2014 at 12:53am |
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OMG THIS WAS WHACKED.
Izaiah - good job on getting in a few punches. you tripped on alot of ur words, but still carried across the point. Young D - sorry but, first off, all i heard was audio in my left ear. u didnt really make punches or personals, just kept talking about his bitch. MVGT: Izaiah for proper mixing and actually delivering a few punches
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Posted: 02 December 2014 at 7:29am |
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Iz gets the ko
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