Heat Wave: HW Text (Rd 1): Zinilli v Rapper T |
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Cuba 
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 Topic: HW Text (Rd 1): Zinilli v Rapper TPosted: 18 July 2015 at 4:12pm |
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Best of 3 votes from JUDGES Straight battle round |
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Cuba
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Posted: 18 July 2015 at 4:12pm |
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Zinilli aka Zinaii
Well its The super troll. I guess you still can't admit ya bars weak Besides trolling? You a slow day on alternative news; cause I aint seen shit from RT! You quick to dodge beef! Your ability lacks; so please pardon him for slacking guys Lyrically? If we take his rhymes and strip t's, well see they'll leave an audience unsatisfied! I'm not one to down talk But if i was you? I'd be feeling hopeless, shit S'like you dont exist; this is our third time battling; and your're down in votes; at 0-6 But you flow legit? Nope Ya bish! He's pissed at the voters cuz he can't score You're a rapper that trolls. So I guess we all know what that T stands for! Thinking I'll be contested you're foolish, After 3 ko's just confess you're a loser When you told nigma "you carry guns to work? "I was thinking so do the rest of the roofers!" Ya foundations weak recheck your blueprints; joined in '13 damn and you still improving? You never get props; only time we searching for RT to give a pound? its from twitter users Zinny losing? Not at all; your record's decent but you can tell he's not a winner Having Back and forth's every post showed "T overboard"; like rebellious politicians The Shit you've pulled? I won't forgot it, when you drop Shit nobody's overzealous So you can't boast you're better; especially when we all watch T get suspended like holy relics |
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Cuba
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Posted: 18 July 2015 at 4:13pm |
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Rapper T
Zinaii this pisspie beat me when I was a noob but if honest with himself was it right to do? hit on the new kid so one day in the tournament it's blatantly obvious it's Z's turn to be shit! Z can't get ANY good looks even if he weren't a guy that's me being nice, then he'd STILL earn stink eye you don't honestly think you're gonna win right? HA! First you need creative concepts and ideas inside your writing cos honestly you can't rhyme for shit and you sound so rehearsed I think you might have bit your lyrics from other writers and though I admit I'm good, you could at least try to write lyrics Now you're crying kid!? Cos no lie, you're whipped! I surprised this fickle bitch like a fly unzipped!!! that's right my time is this, I run deep as o-cean And the only time that Z is EVER low is lo-zin! |
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Posted: 20 July 2015 at 10:01pm |
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Zin
Well its The super troll. I guess you still can't admit ya bars weak
Besides trolling? You a slow day on alternative news; cause I aint seen shit from RT! average opener, i felt the punch was a little wordy. 3.5/5 You quick to dodge beef! Your ability lacks; so please pardon him for slacking guys Lyrically? If we take his rhymes and strip t's, well see they'll leave an audience unsatisfied! much better, thought this one worked on several levels. creative and effective 4/5 I'm not one to down talk But if i was you? I'd be feeling hopeless, shit S'like you dont exist; this is our third time battling; and your're down in votes; at 0-6 this one'll sting lol. I feel there was potential for some '6 below' word play or something 3.5/5 But you flow legit? Nope Ya bish! He's pissed at the voters cuz he can't score You're a rapper that trolls. So I guess we all know what that T stands for! this flowed well and landed as a jab, hope this is the last troll punch at this point tho 3/5 Thinking I'll be contested you're foolish, After 3 ko's just confess you're a loser When you told nigma "you carry guns to work? "I was thinking so do the rest of the roofers!" lol your best bar of the battle, and not just cause my name was in it. 4.5/5 Ya foundations weak recheck your blueprints; joined in '13 damn and you still improving? You never get props; only time we searching for RT to give a pound? its from twitter users gettin a bit wordy here again. you could have accomplished a lot more in fewer words with the RT play 2.5/5 Zinny losing? Not at all; your record's decent but you can tell he's not a winner Having Back and forth's every post showed "T overboard"; like rebellious politicians not bad, small jab at best. 2/5 The Shit you've pulled? I won't forgot it, when you drop Shit nobody's overzealous So you can't boast you're better; especially when we all watch T get suspended like holy relics suitable closer, lacked the firewords and wowing effects of a great one but wasnt bad 3/5 Rapper T Zinaii this pisspie beat me when I was a noob but if honest with himself was it right to do? no punch or insult here. 0/5 hit on the new kid so one day in the tournament it's blatantly obvious it's Z's turn to be shit! trying to insult but not building on anything here 1/5 Z can't get ANY good looks even if he weren't a guy that's me being nice, then he'd STILL earn stink eye this didnt make sense grammatically and if there was a punch with the stink eye bit it went over my head 0/5 you don't honestly think you're gonna win right? HA! First you need creative concepts and ideas inside this is you giving him advice, not insulting him your writing cos honestly you can't rhyme for shit and you sound so rehearsed I think you might have bit generic and lacked tenacity 1/5 your lyrics from other writers and though I admit I'm good, you could at least try to write lyrics nonsensical, only way this would have been a punch is if he was ever caught writing, and even then it'd be basic at best 1/5 Now you're crying kid!? Cos no lie, you're whipped! I surprised this fickle bitch like a fly unzipped!!! best attempt of punch, but still was off. the punch aspect of this was in your surprising him which isnt insulting 1/5 that's right my time is this, I run deep as o-cean And the only time that Z is EVER low is lo-zin! i thought this was your best bar, it attempted word play and was actually directed at your opponent. build from this! 1.5/5 This was one sided from me, Zin has demonstrated a grasp of the expectations in a battle and Rapper T is still on his way there. Zin took this with ease in my eyes. +1 Zinilli
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 22 July 2015 at 3:25pm |
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This was an easy vote for me and to be quite honest I had some disappointment at the same time. Zin you really have some talent when you want to showcase it. It seems like in this battle, because of the record you currently hold against Rapper T, you went kind of easy. Or just simply ran out of material bc the constant name play in every bar it seemed. Although, that was a flaw in your attack I still felt you kept attacking him at some capacity. Zin out worked Rapper T in every aspect of text battling aside from flow. Rapper T had a nice short flow which was easy to grab but there was no lyrical content to support that flow. Some highlights of this battle was Zins line about the roofers. Also, though there was a couple lines about a Rapper T being a troll, the T stand for line was comical. All in all, this was a landslide victory for Zin.
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Cuba
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Posted: 27 July 2015 at 7:00pm |
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Zin advances to round 2 of Heat Wave...
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