Lyrical Warfare: A1: Shadow vs Scorpia King

First to three EXPLAINED votes wins (explanations to be judged by me), 3-0 is a KO

No minimum, and a maximum of 8 bars

Crew Votes ALLOWED

Flips/feeding PERMITTED

Drop whenever you like (first or second, doesn't matter)

Deadline: 29th OCTOBER - MIDNIGHT (GMT (which is forum time+5) - NO EXCEPTIONS

SEE TOURNAMENT RULES THREAD FOR FULL LIST OF RULES.

Good luck... 1

cool

try rhyming at the end of lines so we can catch the flow without reading it 8 times...
Thank you, come again

this is tha same battle, just reworked, i fink this is ok to do right??

i rap wiv flows, break backs u a pretender so bitch jus face facts
im a master-mind, wiv time i blow holes in faces rip out both ya eyes
i cut of ur stiff tonge like lyrical circumsition, u in a difficult position
how u plan on spittin bitch pay attention,
i punch hard wiv perfect precision that helps u into a new direction,
bitch put on protection
i dun mean a condom we not here for sex, but u will get fucked
u outta luck, u called shadow cause u stuck wiv ya dick to butts.
u need to "fade" out, damn nigga u played out, for u tha futures
laid out,
u cant run game in here, u a wannabe bitch so jus follow tha sign, it says "way out"
ok im gonna "tie" this up,shadow i wanna thank you
u got tha rope but shit ill help to hang you/
just for joinin this tourny i think tha mods shud ban u.

Lol get this over with..

Keystyles

ayo..

Shit this Front Line Faggot Cudnt b c'n *Fade* if he was checking out his *X-Box*
I key sickness Like *Cartridge Pencils* the way i just let the *lead-Drop*..1
son i'll make your-pop..u cudnt be *Dead-Hot*..if *Flame-throwed* ur Torso..
but u no Shadow Spits Fire..cos i have Cowards *bent-Back* like *Quasimodo*..
shit i'll take the No-sho,ur verse is like *Fightin-ghosts* u jus aint *touchin-me*
n i dont even admit to beat you..so people ask who it was i reply *it-wuznt-me*
cos wit a-duzzon-keyz..i av Fagz *pants-over-there-head* like *Simon-Cowell*
 you can Keep tryin all your like..but the sayins true *U'll-neva-catch-a-shadow*

Expo

them pencils where once the lead runs out another little nib of led comes out..

btw this was Keyed Like SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTT

Goodluck Scorp

Uppin

scropia king.. flow iz iffy, punches are kinda played, but still strong and
hard hittin in my opnion, overall a ok verse

shadow- i got da blue and white skin so readin ya white writing iza
bitch...BUt... u took thiz e-z.. punchez were aiite but wordplay wuz nice
some multies here and there... nice work

v/ SHADOW

Shadow - nice verse.... nice personals... nice multis... nice wordplay... nice flow... lol... i liked the verse alot... only thing i didnt was the Different Colors & Style...

Scorpia - not bad... i see you getting better... multis were ok... punches didnt hit hard enouf... no real wordplay

Vote ~ Shadow