1-2 Punch League: Goryo vs Dizz (1-2 W3) Open For Votes |
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Topic: Goryo vs Dizz (1-2 W3) Open For VotesPosted: 13 September 2016 at 11:22pm |
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Due Thursday midnight Yank time
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 14 September 2016 at 7:16pm |
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Goryo, you're horrible bro, your shitty offering's deplorable
You beating Me would be adorable like kiddies frothing a glory-hole |
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Goryo.
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Posted: 15 September 2016 at 8:58am |
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Fuck brightening the sky, he'll never 'sun' me, the Day is dark He couldn't light a bulb above his head with his creative spark
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Posted: 15 September 2016 at 7:17pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Well this is tough one call,both seem evenly matched.. Dizzle you always bring them bars with questionable content,this bar here is quite tame by your standards..lol.i thought it was a decent punch,but it lacked any real personal,but the creativity is there though,basic but there,on the whole a decent shot.. Goryo you on the other hand had some play on a personal,although the punch was a jab at best,you had an half decent set up going on,but the punchline didn't capitalise on it for me,it seemed to come off as flat really,almost basic.. Overall both had pluses and minuses,Dizzle with a punch and Goryo with a personal,and in battle when voting punches are the strongest in the voting category,so on that logic,Day gets my vote here,but this was hard to vote on,and other ppl may see it different to me, and that's all good,as i expect the voting to swing back and forth. Vote...Dizzle..peace. |
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Posted: 15 September 2016 at 9:20pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Dizzle, pretty gnarly bar on its own, but more suitable in an OM, it lacked that personal touch towards your opponent to make an effectiv hit wich is the objective here. Gory, a decent bar, I see the play on his name and it kinda works, could be flipped more directly tho. Vote Goryo, not nearly as nasty but more punchy and personal.
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Posted: 16 September 2016 at 12:29am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. No hate here, all opinion. Day: horrible concept, didnt even link to the opponent, just a shock bar. And didnt even have insane flow to hide behind or anything. You came against a relatively unknown, you should be smashing this. Goryo: You're not off the hook, cos you didnt come personal and your wording was sloppy. BUT you actually attempted word play - which gets more props for me than throw away child abuse bars. Youre both better than this. Mvgt- Goryo. |
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Posted: 17 September 2016 at 2:43am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. diz, you had nic scheme and flow throughout your bar, and a nasty image, but there wasn't anything personal. this was a miss for me. nice technique, but that's about it. goryo, I enjoyed the concept over all, the set up was a little choppy for me, but then the punch line was butter as I read it. well done over all. polish the set up a bit more on the next one. mfvgt goryo, for the nice punch.
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Posted: 17 September 2016 at 2:51am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Dizz, being 100 this was garbage. No sting, no personal attack, you didn't develop or build towards anything, this was generic shock value 0/10 garbage. Goryo, contrasting your opponent, you used his name (albeit in a non-original way) in the setup, then developed a concept in the punch that was pretty decent. +1 Goryo |
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Posted: 19 September 2016 at 3:02pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Day - Your shit was kinda aimless, no diss, I mean it could've been said to anyone. Try and make it more direct. Goryo - Something simple, for me a bit more theatrics, get the crowd hyped and shit. But it was direct though. Vote - Goryo, for having a punch actually directed at it's opponent.
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