1-2 Punch League: Axy vs Droidian (1-2 W3) Open For Votes

Due Thursday midnight Yank time

axy given an extension for a couple more hours

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OK let the did see the rabbit..

Droid liking the wit in this bar,comparing him to LA's Whore had
a cruel feel to it,although very loosely the comparison worked,
and turned out to be a good personal,the punch was equally good
with the double meaning of the letter V..

Axy you did have some wording issues in the set up,(choke it
on blow),this came off as odd to me,as you were stressing the
end rhyme to fit.the punch/personal was good though,helped you
regain some ground back,the android lines are reading tired
now,(if you was a newbie I'd let it slide)...

Overall,Droid was more consistent on the whole with he's bar,
Axy had a good personal/punch,but then Droid had that too,i
feel that Droid's bar was more creative and person centred,
so on that basis I'm giving Droid the nod here,unlucky Axy.

Vote..Droid..peace.

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droid, I fuck with this, imagining a out-stretched vneck as a pussy was quite funny to me actually. nicely done. my only critique is im not a big fan of using single letters so often in bars, such as la and the v later in same line.

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