1-2 Punch League: Goryo vs Nigma (WEEK 5) |
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 Topic: Goryo vs Nigma (WEEK 5)Posted: 28 September 2016 at 1:12am |
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Goryo.
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Posted: 29 September 2016 at 10:36pm |
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Your try-hard punches fuckin suck, and they're quite annoying too You're like a junkie cause that 'substance abuse' is destroying you
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Nigma
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Posted: 30 September 2016 at 12:42am |
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Last Week? Ya thrust blocked Crossing Concrete and appauled the audience, only 2 fingers were lifted
And that's NOT peace, it's ungodly quality, so drunken Johnny C is not the only singer (sin Gor) committed Expo: His loss to Concrete only got 2 votes last week. Johnny Cash was arrested for being blackout drunk. Kinda works as 'Syn Gor committed' as him and Concrete are both from Syndicate. I digress.
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Posted: 30 September 2016 at 1:27am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. damn goryo, nice job. this is my favprite punch ive ever seen from you. great job all around, and nice original angle/concept. no complaints, solid job. nigma, you had too much going on in your bar, they just felt way too long and dragged on. and for me the singer committed is a bit of a stretch for text, maybe in audio it would be straight. mfvgt goryo, it was simple, not too wordy, and a great angle. in my opinion this was like a flip of his bar... but you went first, so not the case. great job.
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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 1:11am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Gor, short, sweet and effective, shit was nice, not much more about it to say really. Nigma, I think the '2 fingers lifted' idea had crazy potential, but the final outcome was just too much. One effective concept is usually enough to make a punch work. Vote Goryo for being brutally direct. |
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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 1:53am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Goryo had a good direct punch, flow is good. Nigma had a good concept but I think he tried to fit too much into it, it lessened the impact imo. Mvgt goryo |
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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 4:56am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. ooof. nice shot here by Gor who didn't rhyme as tightly as usual for some reason but managed the gut shot. thought Nigma brought something that might be too elaborate for a quick shot tilt. still fun af to unpack tho. v. Gor |
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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 7:56pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Oreos Gory; you hit him with the biscuit abuse this week, I thought it was a pretty effective shot, had that clown element to it and seemed like a good personal angle Not a ko type shot but still solid Guardian of the Church wardens Nigma; this one was slop slow roasted fam, I'm cool with long bars buy this was missing a solid angle for me Vote Gory for the better battle verse |
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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 9:00pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. yo nig the bar was stretched out bro and the expo was stretched to and the Syn gor was a bit of a reach to shorten it up and get to your punch a bit quicker to make it more effective and gor this was a nice clean shot the substance abuse tied in well and the multi end rhymes made it a solid hit mvgt goryo for the all around better punch
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