Text Battle Archive: [Text] Beans vs Neek [3-2]

House Rules (with the EXCEPTION of NO EXTENSIONS)
Due Monday midnight PST (3am EST)
4 Bars (LA style)

expos:

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Neek..

You certainly went for this here,this drop kind of reminded me of the approach Law
takes in battles,with the links that come coupled with punches or wordplays,like you
did here,your punches/personals were firing well throughout this piece,and the film
/wrestling references also found their mark too,which just added extra weight to them
overall,you had a lot going on in your verse,besides the punch/personals,you also
brought in acronyms and wordplay to the mix,this has a little something for everybody
to like within,a complete battle verse in elements really,and creative too i thought,good
constructed piece..


Beans..

Yep you came out snorting here,you had some real nice punches also,the personals were present as well and firing,the gripe I do have is your flow,it was on the shaky
side in parts which in turn gave a stop start feel to your verse on reading,even after
a couple of reads the gripe still exists,your last bar is a prime example of this,for me
it didn't really rhyme to well,(if not at all),with that typed it was a solid angle and play,green/Thomas/dead sister,nicely done to be honest,i also liked how you approached this battle too,it had a direct aggressive quality about it,bordering on the
emotional aspect in the way of anger,good work..


Overall,a real hard battle to call really,it was like finesse v raw,i liked both offerings here
on the table,because this is a close affair I read both pieces again before i made this
call,as there has to be a winner right?,my vote goes to Neek here's why,he verse
just read and felt more to my liking,props though Beans,for me your flow took a bit
away for me,props to both here..

Vote...Neek..peace

A forfeit is, as far as I know unprecedented in history of LA. Thanks for that Neek.

My ruling is thus:

A forfeit needs to be mutually agreed between both participants by posting in the thread. Until that time, the battle remains open. If the battle is closed through normal means before the offer is accepted the result stands.

In this case we'd treat it as a 3-2 win for Beans. All votes cast always stand.

Currently 2-0, awaiting vote(s) or Beans.

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without extensions, you be Zin'N, but your leader act like your keys are so dope
fuck no! - your name should be a site-wide acronym to - BE A NoShow
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Ok ok ok, it looks like you had a certian angle you were going for. I liked the
direction with the BE A NOShow. That was pretty slick wordplay


this bum play like he bout to flip , but shit! this joke Bernie Mac in above the rim(Plea's!!)
so he Jobs , and claims his steez is, like Stevens , thats why competitors clutch the win (Jeez)
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this felt forced to shit, not liking this bar at all. Seems like you went for a play
but it fell flat


you always BEEN under Excalibur, an w/ Arthur retired, youll be a stand in, forever
one half 'tag champ?' thats a laugh fam, you dipped from Cuba like Manny Ribera
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I see all the connections here but it didnt pull me in. I felt this went pretty flat.
Flow and mechanics there but not a worthy punch


you coward! how that verse for Goryo take TWO HOURS?!
I do not comprehend
In the words of Buzz Lightyear, "you sad, pathetic man".. you even photoshopped a friend.
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Again, this came off statementish and only thing holding this together is your mechanics.





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Listen you faggot....
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Dopez


PM after our last battle Neek said he was EX'd out, still You not Far Failing
Cos all the tough talk proves you need my partner.. Or PPL I've KO'd to get star ratings!
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damn, this was pretty harsh, i liked the angle you went with here. The flow was nice to.
This was a good opener IMO



Backed down after the Dick rider comment... This hoe'll get worked
Funny How they showed up Wit votes for you, before I even posted a verse
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Nice Mechanics and the punch was really relevant.

& my clique only responds to talent..S'why your disses dont belong in the ring
You dissed the whole Empire managing to not talk to the kings
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Another nice little bar here. got right to the point with no bullshitting. Kings, rings
talent and empire all connected well here

I'll run ya pockets weekly, or ya fam'll get stomped quick
Murder your sister & make sure you still show up for the green like i coached Isiah Thomas
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Ok, you ended this was a haymaker man. This was dope.


Overall -MVGT BEANS, More potent with the punches and they all were relevant. Flow and mechanics
on point. Neek lacked the ability to drop a verse with substance.

Obviously you cannot vote on your own battle. Neek's "vote" is hidden & I have cleaned this up.

Neek wins via 3-2 nailbiter