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DressToKill 
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 Topic: (Audio) DTK vs Ch3kkgame [2-3]Posted: 02 July 2017 at 8:05pm |
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The original comeback kid
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 08 July 2017 at 8:29pm |
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My shits ready gay boy, where the fuck you at?
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The original comeback kid
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 08 July 2017 at 9:32pm |
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RIP * Check has literally more tracks than followers on soundcloud * The dude rocked a Puma hat in his video to slip * Frank Abagnale produced fake cheques during his scams as a fake pilot * Atlanta Falcons lost to the patriots in the super bowl, Tom Brady is the QB * He's only voted against Doom once is his whole career here..it was in an early battle vs Spectreman * He literally said he wouldn't battle Doom many times openly Yo, Dress has come to smash and clobber ya What audio king has more tracks than followers? Tries to win battles on some sway shit? While riding doom like bitches on an aids dick Rhymes basic and careered off defiling noobs Old enough to seriously consider retiring soon Like? How old is this styless dude Didn't Check say LA was full of old men? PLOT TWIST he was talking about the other guys in his room! Checklame vs DressToKill Lyrical Assault 2017 Someone wheel him out with his wheelchair.. Geriatric fuck.. Shut the fuck up Dress said shut the fuck up!! You protected doom to keep his ass in the belt Creating friendly fire but only blasted yourself This slime ball's asking to be hit with cannons Cuz I'm the ghost buster minus a Rick Miranus! I script to damage with these rap labotomys You on the cypher twice but only half the quality Now you got your team in sync with this rookie Rock a PUMA hat cuz you thinkin like a pussy judging by his wins we know this cat is frail Cheque is producing lies like Frank Abganale* You're out of focus, need a massive reform Got more low budget videos than amatuer porn Check getting ripped if he texting a flow Struggling with XO like Asexual folk Audio's his game? Nah hes a shifty actor Cuz he failed with LP like every shitty rapper His noob battles spell this chump isnt tight I got check-in a loss like being bumped off a flight SHUT THE FUCK UP Dress says shut the fuck up!! Check game gonna to retire!! Dress turning the king into a squire your whole clique is shitty(Yeeaaahhh) Ya'll ain't fucking with me LA's bitchy comity simply aint hitting D Ya'll fucked up when you tried to mess with me Bitch where you at? This Atlanta kid is faking it Call me Uncle Tom cuz you loosin to a patriot Him hot on a track? this hoe's the mildest On criss cross beats cuz ya flow is childish Acting like he's someone with nothing to prove Should speak on my kids cuz im sonning you to! Your boy dead, ya'll must love the abuse Nobody else gonna touch someone as ugly as you! (Ewww) Let's talk votes, no hiding your stalkerish Stay checking Doom's box like a gynocologist Have you ever really voted against em?!? Hold a no battle clause, for ya own protection Dress is up and rising on the mic to riot I laugh at G force like a fighter pilot I'm a boss with the shots but stay sober Let me tell you check, mate..its game over |
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The original comeback kid
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ch3kkgame
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Joined: 03 July 2014 Location: Atlanta Status: Offline Points: 1145  Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 14-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 09 July 2017 at 8:58pm |
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Lol, Bruh. Settle down. Gay? After all your suspect activity? How dare you.
Expos: 1. DTK said he wanted to Tea Bag me. Suspect as fuck. No exceptions.  2. Billy Gunn & Chuck Pulumbo were a wrestling Tag Team that had a lot of suspect activity going on. So much infact they got married on a televised episode of wrestling. 3. Kait is his so called daugters mothers name. Summer is his daughters name and Jacob is his brothers name which is also his daughters real fathers real name. Thus came Jake. He also does HVAC work.  4. 06 - 16 was how long he has been on this site at the time that he stated in the History of Dress http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?tid=41882 5. He lost a battle with Game. Not Big Game, the other Game. I Kontinue. http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/dresstokill-vs-ikontinue_topic9735.html 6. He battled Dialekt and said dialekt bit a line from somebody and it was just a recycled line, while he did the same thing. Battle of the biters by his own statements. http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/dresstokill-vs-dialekt_topic9122.html 7. All the muscles for nothing, and he looks like Ashton Kutcher with Roid Rage. The broke version.  8. Got destroyed by Arthur who exposed the pics that he posted. Thus the arm pit line that started Arthurs verse.  9. Googled one of his pics and Google said he's a Senior Citizen.  10. Battle stats says he is 78 - 62. (SMH) 11. He told L.P his flow was stellar on the track The Lords Hands. When it was more than obvious his flow was off and trash.  12. DTK is the reason L.P wont get better feeding his over displayed ego telling him his flow is stellar when its ass. He will never change it how it should be and keep dropping mediocre audios and swear its tight because he was told that by none other than DTK. If thats your boy you supposed to keep it 100 so he can advance. Smh I'm only posting these for the text heads. Lyrics: |
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ch3kkgame
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Joined: 03 July 2014 Location: Atlanta Status: Offline Points: 1145 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 14-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 09 July 2017 at 8:59pm |
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The lyrics didn't post.
Lyrics: First I gotta laugh at DTK and his bitch... For some reason he thinking he gone give me the Slip... Niggas a trip, looking at me like you wanted a kiss... Well pucker up, I got something to put on ya lips... You thought of leaving ya seed like you was true to be missed... Stupid as shit, he's better off if you decided to dip... You a monster? Only when regarding a dick... You going hard on it huh? Do you swallow or spit? I talk to him, look how im addressing da kill... You can't be to hard with a dress and some hells... While you I doing ya HVAC I'll be a plumber to Kait... she calls me Ike, I make her eat summa da cake... But before we start, I'll take Summer to Jake.. That's her daddy, I bet that have ya stomach a Ache... The tag team duo, I'll still damage the squad.. L.P riding ya dick like he can handle da bars. ( handle bars ) You niggas Diva babies, only rockin pampers N bras.... N got gas, to think you can go and challenge the God... You silly as fuck... only thing you gone trample is Jaws... It's Billy and Chuck..in love with matching Ankles to draws... From 06 - 16, you playing with text... Hit da mic for a month n now you swear you a vet.. As I look back, you won a little battle Zin... He even more trash than you, Don't count that shit as a win... So you went and made it to mics, Now I commend you... Imma Beast, look at all of these peeps I done been through... Ice Cold, but I only got flames , that I can send you. Pause, you even lost a battle with game. Now I Knotinue.. This a clean sweep, it won't even make it to the wire... You and dialekt battled for the basis of a biter... Shit, I Thought you had the basics as a writer? Steady slick dissin, but won't take it to the cypha... 10 years plus, but you ain't getting any tighter... All them muscles for nothing it don't make you a fighter... You a typer, standing center stage witta strika... For your sake, Josh posting pictures was poor taste, da boy straight, look like Ashton Kutcher With Roid Rage... Cause your fate, is swimming with a shark and your bait.. once your ate, I don't wanna hear you no more K? This a Clip, you better stick to playing ya part? Better stay on ya P's, or you can answer to Art... Wait you already did, No bite, witta bark... Get you a canvas Take a seat N paint n the dark.. I don't wanna hear about you having a spark... That arm pit line, had him take ya light from the start... I bet ya ass like Slip, flipping out over a bitch... Even Google agrees that yoassu older than shit... I saw your record, Now I question taking ya cred... I couldn't laugh, I was to busy shaking my head... Let me break it down and tell you bout Mr VANCE... nonobserVANCE shit it hot, IrreleVANCE Got Damn, What I need to say it again.. None of sir Vance shit is hot, I'll rail vance.. Wait a minute, Now I gotta pretty good hunch... I bet ya won't come with 1 original punch... You'll keep mentioning Doom, Like they'll really be pumped... It don't matter, either way you finna lunch... You rapping on a beat is absurd.. You'll take a line, Then try to cram in the words.. You bob'n ya head, thinking to ya self That I'm served... The whole time I'm listening like He got the nerve. You like tea bagging men, boi you a perv.. Come out the closet, tell em how you burgling terds... I ain't neva been feeding a drop... on some wack shit, and tell a lil nigga it's hot... Y'all some fuck niggas, that's how I know he ya friend... You supposed to keep a stack, and tell him do it again... It's a wrap, neva a question of who the king... If L.P. don't get better he only got you to blame... |
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Cuba
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Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 13 July 2017 at 9:55pm |
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Open for votes
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-Que-
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Posted: 13 July 2017 at 10:25pm |
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Disclaimer(I already pmed DTK my honest opinion) just so theres no secrets n fuck shit goin on. I felt since I did that it would appear sketchy. So if both parties agree , I will gladly put in my vote. My bad for this spammish mess.
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 13 July 2017 at 10:30pm |
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Que you've always been honest, i have no issues with you voting on any battle of mine won or loose
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The original comeback kid
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ch3kkgame
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Joined: 03 July 2014 Location: Atlanta Status: Offline Points: 1145 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 14-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 13 July 2017 at 11:08pm |
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Go ahead Que.
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-Que-
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Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 14 July 2017 at 12:49am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. DTK : Yo...your improving alot being able to keep steady but you still need to shave off the excess wording in able to go with the track instead of sounding like your struggling at times. With that being said...I thought your agression was spot on from start to finish. Your mic presence was there. It sounded like you legitimately hated your opponent and was ready to go the next level. Punches were all direct and personal. The Xo line was clean.. The puma hat line was kinda funny. The Doom/Check relationship was cool but already addressed. The Uncle Tom just didn't come off right. Nice concept but used incorrectly. The more tracks than followers hit. Far as the track...it fit the moment. You have a very nice pen. Replay value of this was def there. Delivery as I said was off and on. Check : First off I wanna say...you always flow well and have a good command over how you want to come off so with that being said....I was really taken back by the track you chose. You usually come wit it very aggressive but this sounded laid back. I was juiced to hear what you were finta pull out the hat but it was kinda disappointing to hear mainly just a good laid back flow. Imo...your pen is average but you make up for it tremendously by the way your able to effortlessly switch it up between aggression and humor to make muthafukkahs feel small. Long story short...that Ashton Kutcher shit was hillarious lmaoo plus that whole bar set was clean. The LP/handle the bars came off nice too.The strugglin to stay on beat thing was ok but already said thru yalls back n forths.Other than that I felt some of your expos was better that the actual bars that went with them. You killed him on flow and came thru ok on the pen.Replay value wasn't on the high mark for me. Overall...I think DTK edges this. This is mainly because I could feel his hunger to strike out at his opponent. Mvgt DTK |
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 14 July 2017 at 2:11pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. just to let you know, i dont read expos. not my thing DTK - Opening was pretty nice. When the beat dropped, i was hoping for a more explosive start. The flow was nice. Bounced well with the beat. Personals were nice and the insults were dope. You coming full steam with quality and technique also. The delivery was what stood out the most during this battle. You gave it a tone. I script to damage with these rap labotomys You on the cypher twice but only half the quality ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This was nice. Defo the Let's talk votes, no hiding your stalkerish Stay checking Doom's box like a gynocologist ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ See, in text... this is questionable for many but when you hear it in Audio. Its butter and nice. Nice slant on these bars _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Check - The fuck is with you and the expos? Im not reading that shit. thats fucking redunculous. I know you hungry to beat DTK but that Expo shit is worse than Missions. Flow, delivery, technique, beat choice was nice. The problem i have is the constant dick/gay talk in this. You silly as fuck... only thing you gone trample is Jaws... It's Billy and Chuck..in love with matching Ankles to draws... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ That was dope as fuck. 10 years plus, but you ain't getting any tighter... All them muscles for nothing it don't make you a fighter... You a typer, standing center stage witta strika... For your sake, Josh posting pictures was poor taste, da boy straight, look like Ashton Kutcher With Roid Rage... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This was nasty as fuck. This is kind of a tough one. Do i go with the experienced Audiohead? Or do i go with the up and coming DTK? Both had good bars and technique. ughhh MVGT TO DTK - Agression was much more present. Flow and the Punches seemed to have landed much better. Also, alot less filler bars. It was a tough one cuz I know Check dope but DTK did his thing here making more bars relevant. |
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Cuba
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Posted: 14 July 2017 at 8:03pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Firstly...I didn't read either of y'all expos as I expect you to deliver your shit in a way that resonates with me as a listener. You wouldn't rock up to an Open Mic event with handouts... DTK - honestly I was a bit underwhelmed...I've watched some of your videos and always thought you had pretty good delivery given your experience & knowing the quality of your writing and experience I felt like you'd come across a lot harder than you did. I felt a lot of your punches were quite basic conceptually and generally you didn't really get at him all that much...didn't feel like you had much aggression and didn't do him massive amounts of damage. Not to say it was bad or anything like that it's just that I felt you lacked a bit where I'd expect you to be strongest in terms of formulating punchlines. There were also some pretty old references in here like the Ghostbusters and Criss Cross stuff that I was like, that should've been cut. All that said there were parts I enjoyed, I particularly liked the creativity/musicality around the shut the fuck up parts. Overall I felt like this was a good drop for someone still transitioning into audio from a long history of text battling. Check - personally I felt like you had a lot in there to enjoy...real vocal presence and aggression throughout. To me this came across like a well-crafted diss verse rather than a series of punchlines which is what you want really. There were points were you kind of stumbled in terms of the flow but that didn't really detract too much for the overall feel for me. I also felt like you dissed consistently and that coupled with the aggression does damage. Although I agree with Que to an extent that some of your concepts are basic I also quite liked the Vance stuff, I think you could learn a bit from some of the higher quality text heads on the site in that regard as some of them know how to "deliver" a really high quality punch through concept. All that said I still think this was very listenable and I thought it was a pretty robust drop even if it was lacking some outright haymakers. You also demonstrated your battle smarts by undermining his Doom material which I think took the shine off some of his most personal attacks. So yeah, overall for me I think when you consider all the components that make a good quality audio diss track Check comes out on top for me...felt like experience won the day for me & it just seemed like Check had more desire to really get at DTK than vice versa...which I guess is demonstrated by the biblical expos. Gotta be longest expos ever. Vote = Check |
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Crimson Juice
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Posted: 15 July 2017 at 11:42am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. OK guys lets get this.. DTK I thought you approach to this battle was nice,the intro minus the beat was a good inclusion i thought,then the beats kicks in (which I liked it had a build up vibe,gave your lyrics a sense of urgency,plus it had an underground sound,gave it a raw feel too),as for your contents these were also good,I liked the ghost buster reference to be honest, yeah it's old but an obscure reference adds flavour to a piece when done right like it was here,and you pretty much carried on as you started,you had sprite and flow even your delivery/presence were noticeable too,your similes were popping off well,the Puma hat was nice and creative as too the best punch of this battle with the Uncle Tom/Patriot concept,you also had lulls within this track too,the gynecologist bar didn't work to great for me and the obscure reference to Kiss Kross didn't add to much either, (yeah i know he Dub over it recently,but the fact is he did do it well,irrelevant to what you thought about it by calling him childish,I get the connection,it just didn't hold water for me),all in all a solid track which i enjoyed,your punches/personal for the most part were landing well,good work here.. Chekk first off you had a real nice polished feel to your track,the rolling keys with the piano was solid,your presence/delivery was ripe with this controlled aggression vibe you injected here,i got the sense of you taking your time to dismantle him via this approach,i also feel you got at him well with your contents too,and the Jaws/Billy n Chuck was witty made me smirk that,I believe this track was aimed more in the way of personals rather than being totally punch driven,which was cool,I also liked the variety of angles/concepts used to get at him,(past battles/alliances/crew),you went in on the research aspect,it seemed you really wanted this due to investing the time to make and compile this track overall,it's pleasing to see the footwork not being ignored and just wacking out punches to compensate for not researching info,plus you also had a few subtle similes yourself here,a real nice track that i appreciated on the whole,hence your tracks running time,and I'll type now,although it went over,the time elapsed you put to good use so I don't have an issue with that,good work.. Overall i liked both offering here,quite an even battle really,both had solid shots,both had nice vibes cracking too,this for me boils down to preference as both seemed to cancel each other out in key areas,(similes/punches/delivery shit even presence),& because off the work involved from both it pains me to call a winner, really,but voting calls for a choice to be made,so here my choice,I'm going to go with Chekk on this here's why,he came with an abundance of personals even though some were subtle and not always hard,but they were relevant to this battle though still,plus i liked the smoothness overall with the way he delivered it,it was clean and catchy,DTK sorry but this is all I could use to separate you both to make the choice,as your track was solid as well (truth),props to both here as for the neutral it was highly entertaining.. Vote..Chekk..peace. |
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Lord Puente
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Posted: 15 July 2017 at 7:39pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. DTK first part before the beat, you should have mixed it differently, less reverb and ish, and the delivery wasnt hard, slight corniyness to it, but the bars were good. beat drops, i love how this started. you went in hard and then it was hard up until the cat is frail/abagnale then from there up nutil the LP bar was ehhh. the LP bar was wack sauce
next section first 3 lines/bars where off beat, then you got back into the flow and it finished fine. the closer was ehh tho, shoulda ended with one f your harder lines. lines i liked on the cypher twice/half the quality bumped off a flight uncle tom/patriot dooms box/gyno hold a battle clause on your own protection g force fighter pilot others wherr ehh or jabs at best for me. those id say are your best lyrically.
CHECK check, for most of your track, you had a solid flow. you did have a few stumbles, but not as much as dtk. examples of this is: "you a monster" could have been cleaner. "you silly as fuck" was the biggest one that bothered.
really liked some bars, like the game/ikontinue one him not going to cypher call out was cool. ashton kutcher with roid rage anseer to art vance part was ehh for me cram the words/thinking im served i didnt like the the lp part of handle the bars. honestly is a huge miss. you keep claiming me and dtk are boys, but i had asked him to join my crew, then a few hours messaged him that i no longer wanted him in my crew. and i dropped some diss lines on him when i did the track shooting at everyone. so these overused saying of yours is just water. plus honestly the dickriding/handlebar is a bitten line. you changed the meaning of handle bars but made the same relation that has been done may times. the closer was a dope concept.. but legit i think its a miss. you def underrate me for whatever reason. you aint a different playing field.
OVERALL MFGT check over the whole thing i am going to have to give it to ch3kk. He was more consistent. i think DTK had some pretty solid verses, but the whole thing should have been polished over and edited a bit more. check brought the more complete diss and had some nice lines in there as well. *altho all those lp bars where wack sauce tho.* |
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Crimson Juice
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Posted: 16 July 2017 at 6:44am |
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3-2 Chekk..
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