Open Mic: Peace...

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   Yo...
I wish I could freeze time... or go back...
Instead of the middle finger, I'd throw up a 'peace' sign,
Cos from all of the things I have seen via these eyes,
Is they teach lies...  Even people who preach die,
Those who feel it deep inside are not the ones who seek pride,
They know just to go with the flow... we're beach tides,
With no feet tied to our ankles and if there were, they're weak binds,
Cos there's no one to show us the fucking way like street signs,
Life is a steep climb so get up and keep tryin',
Like when I tried to beat Orion and felt I failed each time,
But all I do is speak rhymes and try to come up with deep lines,
In the hope to reach minds that I know will far outreach mine...

Adios... 

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Senor Perfecto Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3279 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Senor Perfecto Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Peace... Posted: 14 August 2025 at 10:29am
	Yo... I wish I could freeze time... or go back... Instead of the middle finger, I'd throw up a 'peace' sign, Cos from all of the things I have seen via these eyes, Is they teach lies... Even people who preach die, Those who feel it deep inside are not the ones who seek pride, They know just to go with the flow... we're beach tides, With no feet tied to our ankles and if there were, they're weak binds, Cos there's no one to show us the fucking way like street signs, Life is a steep climb so get up and keep tryin', Like when I tried to beat Orion and felt I failed each time, But all I do is speak rhymes and try to come up with deep lines, In the hope to reach minds that I know will far outreach mine... Adios...


Red-B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 09 January 2014 Location: FL Status: Offline Points: 415 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-1 Form: NWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Red-B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 14 August 2025 at 7:10pm
	This shit was tight, very simple flowed like a nice little poem. I could tell you wrote this in a relaxed environment. Rocking with this piece rhyme scheme was tight! Keep at it Check out my OM ok hmm