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    Posted: 26 January 2006 at 3:44pm


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 February 2006 at 4:37pm

BSD
Why do I always battle frank? God must hate you I swear it...
I keep takin' you to school - you keep on piling demerits *1
Still I gotta admit, your rhymes are hilarious, dog...
But most of your punches read like a fuckin' librarian's blog *2

There could be plenty of reasons, so I'm having trouble deciding
But, why do all your audios sound like a cartoon character whining? *3
The verdict is in, I'll drive the point home with my gavel
This dude's been beat almost two times more than I've battled! *4

This kid's all downside, equipped with no pro's/prose to extol *5
Your mom popped you out and she was told she gave birth to a mole *6
But like entering the world only to get carted off in a gurney
Your berth/birth in the second round ends with your death in the tourney..

*1 - We've battled more than a few times... I've KO'd him quite a few times...
*2 - VERY dry info-based punch style that ends up being boring at times.
*3 - Listen to his audios and judge for yourself...
*4 - Check his battle stats.
*5 - At the bottom of the amatuer text rankings/actually a few different other meanings if you think about it...
*6 - Net-famous for his ugliness.


FRANK WHITE

your words wont hurt me so stick to stones and sticks
this bitch cant rap he should stick to his grafix
need to no show, n go work on yo weak flow
ashamed of his sound so tried to DJ LA radio
he aint ill i really hope this bitch chokes
cuz he cant punch using the same old fag jokes
Damm you falling of quicker than limbs in land mines
first round your explos were better than YA punchlines
shit you must have cataracts cause you aint seeing past this
beware of the silent archer, why, ur sayin jack shit
this is just a key got plenty more left in the tank
cuz what kind of professional has to spit for rank ?











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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 February 2006 at 8:19pm
But, why do all your audios sound like a cartoon character whining?

This dude's been beat almost two times more than I've battled!

Your berth/birth in the second round ends with your death in the tourney..

^ killer.....

frank u half-assed with pre-school rhymes

your words wont hurt me so stick to stones and sticks
this bitch cant rap he should stick to his grafix
^ come on dogg....

v// Bsd im not even hatin he merked dude
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 February 2006 at 3:43am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 February 2006 at 11:44am
wut 20 said
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 February 2006 at 11:49am
This is alot closer than what 20 said... But I aint disbuteing his vote or sayin Frank won..

Im just sayin' its close

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 February 2006 at 11:12pm
BSD..

nice verse, flow was on point and personals were cool although some are just opinions and not facts. i have seen better from you but overall good verse

Frankie...

started pretty poorly but got ALOT better after first few lines, the wordplay was nice and you had good punches and flow.

overall this is a close battle both verses had good and bad points, i was feeling franks disses and personals more but BSD's flow and creativity caught me more than franks. seems this is a straight forward text battle where the aim is to diss and belittle your opponent and not all about flow and rhythm my vote goes to..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:52pm

Lol Ive Read the Verses n just peep the Replys...N heres mine..this battle is getting excitied

BSD

Came nice with this...I've told u awhile back i was never a fan of your verses but this was cool..U came with the personals n punch's whilst adding humor...Shit was nicely put together..u aimed to crack jokes on Frank and u did it well

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Still I gotta admit, your rhymes are hilarious, dog...
But most of your punches read like a fuckin' librarian's blog *2
^^^Haha Damn thats a killer!!
The verdict is in, I'll drive the point home with my gavel
This dude's been beat almost two times more than I've battled! *4
^^^Haha Again that hit hard
This kid's all downside, equipped with no pro's/prose to extol *5
Your mom popped you out and she was told she gave birth to a mole *6
^^^Lmao Just Ouch!
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FRANK WHITE

this aint hate or nuthin cos me n Frank are cool, but i really wasnt feeling this verse..a couple punchlines hit at BSD but nuthin stood out..alot of things cudda been re-worded to be stronger..u had the ideas..but they wasnt effective.

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need to no show, n go work on yo weak flow
ashamed of his sound so tried to DJ LA radio 

Damm you falling of quicker than limbs in land mines
first round your explos were better than YA punchlines

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Intro-BSD
Punch-BSD
Flow-BSD
Multis-BSD
Personals-BSD
Humor-BSD
Creativity-Frank
Outro-Frank

Vote- BSD...His verse just caught my Attention more.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 February 2006 at 1:12pm

BSD
Why do I always battle frank? God must hate you I swear it...
I keep takin' you to school - you keep on piling demerits *1

nice punch. flows well. personal is blah. overplayed, nice twist on it tho. 3/5

Still I gotta admit, your rhymes are hilarious, dog...
But most of your punches read like a fuckin' librarian's blog *2

ROFL ... class, and true. solid punch. solid personal. 4/5

There could be plenty of reasons, so I'm having trouble deciding
But, why do all your audios sound like a cartoon character whining? *3

meh .. average, droppin off the pace with that. didnt feel the punch. 2.5/5

The verdict is in, I'll drive the point home with my gavel
This dude's been beat almost two times more than I've battled! *4

battle stat punches are poor these days. not sure what a gavel is. average bar. 2.5/5

This kid's all downside, equipped with no pro's/prose to extol *5
Your mom popped you out and she was told she gave birth to a mole *6

prose thing has been used in this tourny before i think. if not then in another FW battle somehwere. none the less. good punch. nothing special. still not as hot as ya openers. 3/5

But like entering the world only to get carted off in a gurney
Your berth/birth in the second round ends with your death in the tourney..

Nice finisher. good punch, good personal 3/5

Overall - 18/30 - nice flow, some solid punches .. fell off in the middle of the verse.


FRANK WHITE

your words wont hurt me so stick to stones and sticks
this bitch cant rap he should stick to his grafix

not feelin this, didnt catch the flow, set up line was poor. 2/5

need to no show, n go work on yo weak flow
ashamed of his sound so tried to DJ LA radio

again, not great. it lacks the somthin u usually bring wit ya hits. flows ok, nothin special. 2.5/5

he aint ill i really hope this bitch chokes
cuz he cant punch using the same old fag jokes

dunno whats happnin here frank. again set up line is poor. punch line is nothin. 2.5

Damm you falling of quicker than limbs in land mines
first round your explos were better than YA punchlines

better punch. kinda funny/true ... best in ya verse so far. 3/5

shit you must have cataracts cause you aint seeing past this
beware of the silent archer, why, ur sayin jack shit

set up lines was cool this time, thought it coulda led somewhere, but the silent archer thing coulda been worder/flipped much better. average bar. 2.5/5

this is just a key got plenty more left in the tank
cuz what kind of professional has to spit for rank ?

Meh ... average punch, not a great finisher... kinda everyone spat for rank too, blah. 2.5/5

Overall ... 14.5/30 - very average verse. nothin like ya usually spit frank. not really impressed wit anybars in particular.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 February 2006 at 6:20pm
Intro-BSD
Punch-BSD
Flow-BSD
Multis-BSD
Personals-BSD
Creativity-Frank
Outro-Frank

Both had good verse imo, both flowed well although bsd edged it in this category and in many others, although he won more categorys the thing that won this for bsd was the simple fact he hit harder with not only punches but personals aswell, like i said both had tight verses and i enjoyed reading both.....but bsd takes this one for hitting harder

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 February 2006 at 9:16pm
ayo, i disagree wit peeps up there that said Frank came below his avreage. in fact, he stepped up here in my eyes.

BSD, lemme start wit the problems i had wit ya verse...reeli, u dont need to explain every obvious punch yo. i understand the punch without u explaining it, even if i didnt know shit about frank in the way it was written. i feel all your punches landed jus above average. like i was like, "yeh, that hit, yeh that hit" but no extraordinary type of thing.


outta all of these.......

*1 - We've battled more than a few times... I've KO'd him quite a few times...
*2 - VERY dry info-based punch style that ends up being boring at times.
*3 - Listen to his audios and judge for yourself...
*4 - Check his battle stats.
*5 - At the bottom of the amatuer text rankings/actually a few different other meanings if you think about it...
*6 - Net-famous for his ugliness.



...only bar number 5 needed explanation. i feel u depend too much on explanations fo rill to make the punches land harder than they actually are


the punches themself did all land as stated before, and to beat this verse, the opponent WOULD need some background in battlin so I'll gve ya props there...u had Frank on the flow which is always a plus

Frank came more direct at BSD. He used the personals better and they came off more hard hitting than BSD's verse. His flow was not as good as BSD's but it was still very workable. the funniest bar in the battle was the expo's line but i gotta say that Franks punches came off nicer to me than BSD's

BSD's punches landed, but not as hard as Franks. Frank used his personals better on BSD. Yeh, BSD had him on the flow but it aint flow that wins a battle


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 February 2006 at 1:21pm
i totally disagree wit game. I think bsd jus crushed this battle. Punches, flows, personals, ereything. Fuck i duno whut yall readin but this wasnt close. Frank had an ok verse, mabe i jus dont feel his text style, i dunno. But Stank got this one... An XX, how can u base a battle verse if u take away flow? This is a rap battle...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 February 2006 at 1:26pm

^ Truth spoken @ your last sentence... u have no idea how many times I gotta say that shit to dumbfucks like that dumbfuck

Anyway... both of u always wanted me to vote this, and I never did, bwahaha... but yea, another good battle between the feudin' folk, even tho it's all in verses in these days... so yea, good shit

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 February 2006 at 2:48pm
Right if i wasnt struggling i would look at that vote. locked BSD is thru










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