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   Let'Z Jus Free~Style Sum Shit !~!Up!~!

YO! It'Z Avaition I'm "verbally~hazardouZ", I'll leave ya word'Z "lyriKally~murdered" and stabbed~2~death, at~best--you'd be, "leakin~letterZ out'cha~chest" and "throwin" a "fit" like a fuckin "tossin~epilepse"//
(epilepsy has fits and tossin is another word for throwin) (1) 
"DJ'z" afraid of "spinin" ma shit coz it "wrecks~his~decks" - I walk about "embarrain~chicks" wit ma "buldgin~peckZ" so they coverin~up their "cup'Z" coz they can't "match~ma~rep'Z"//
(cups = bra size) (2) 
Ya hear ya~heart "shiftin~gears" coz I got'Z it "racin", - I'm "in~patient", i'll leave ya fuckin "wasted" like an "alchohlic~patient"//
(u change gear when u race, got his heart racin..ahh easy) (3) 
'Genius in his basement'-- I'm tha 'king~of~Multi's', I'll give ya a "longer~sentence" than "Ian~Huntley'Z"... 
(Ian Huntley killed 2 skool girls and got a life sentence, biggest murder case in Britain, and sentence...as in verse....) (4)

OoOoOoO....Shit!....

YO! new~stanza same enhancement, I've "always~been~ill"...like I was "born~wit~cancer"// (5)
Akon'Z tha "belly~dancer" I'm here 2 "blow~out ya~speakerZ" --- "rollin~so~good" you must think am rockin dose� "Michelin~sneaker'Z"// (michelin make tyres n they roll...pretty straight forward..) (6) Puttin~together~peices but "LAPD covered his tracKs", who tha fuck ever "handed a gun" 2 "Davey~Mack?" (Suge!) rat~a~tat~tat now even "Cassidy'Z~blasted~da~Mack"//
(david mack accused of killin BIGGIE and tha LAPD covered up all evidence, and Cassidy has just been accused of murder) (7) 
This is RAP but you'd think were "at~tha~beach" tha amount of "shell'Z dat are dropped", fuck~it! you think I was "runnin~a~circus" tha amount of "clowns~dat~I've~mocked"// 
(shells as in shells at beach and gun shells, meanin theres 2 many shootins in rap)(8) 
"EXPLOSION!" I'm tha "terrorist of hip~hop" "bombin" you MC'z like "TnT" when ma "shit~drop" you need 2 "let go of tha mic" coz most of ya'll faggott'z belong in "Brit~Pop!"// (9) 
Ma mouth "cock'Z tha alphabet back" and start'Z "firin~meta'Z", you better have "armered~letter'z" coz dey stay "rippin~ya~into~sector'Z"// (10) 
A.V "Forever~respected" as tha "BEST~on~tha~MIC" (Mike) aKa "Corinna Schumacher" you better believe tha hype...!// 
(corinna schumacher is micheal schumachers wife - best on mic --also best on mike...as in sex...wife..got it?) (11) 
Next time you "talk~ma~name" I'm'a reach in ya mouth and pull out tha "A, V, A, I and tha "T,I,O,N" and take ya word (kill) as a fuckin "INVITATION"// (12)
I'll "lift~ya 10 foot in tha air" "quicker~than~elevation", ma flow is amazin "100% straight~blaze", "hotter" than a "FIRE dat's fully~blazin"// (13) 
You "PUSSYz" better have "nine~lives" goin against ma verse, coz i'll "take you fucka'z out"....more times than a "mental~patients~nurse"// (14) 
I gotcha "on~ya~knee'Z" like "disabled~girls" you givin me "more~than~credit", but you need 2 pull dem panties back up coz like 'John~Leslie' "everybody~hurl'Z" when they "see~you~naked!"// 
(partner in Abi Titmuss home sex tape) (15)......

*Breathe�z out...* damn....

Aiiight look, I'm a balla dat, will leave "above~ya~collar" capped when I spit~from~yap, after I've layed~u~flat for talked~back, ---I'll make tha "talkin stop" when I "mute~ya~tongue", I'll "explode~ya~lung" when I "breathe~a~ton of atomic gas right down~ya~throat"// (16) 
Look, ma 'new~wordz rip through~nerds' that 'act like~hurbs', coz ma 'rude~verse' will leave ya 'wack crew~cursed' wit a 'few~merks' - I 'review~hurt' and leave u like a "JEW...BURNT!"// (17) 
A.V 'switched~his~style' now I got ya'll amazed 'in~vile' wit a "lopsided~smile" ,// (18) 
I'll fire a "thunder~bolt" when ever I hear u "poppin~wit~shotz", you "couldn't be me" if u requested my "cloned~corpse" for "your own~source" i'ma 'known~force'// (19)
Tha gun~lifts and I've 'stunned' like 'Post~War', eveythin comin out ma mouth is "sick" - like I've "kissed a thousand bitches wit cold~sores.."// (20) 
I'll lay ya flat on ya 'own~floor' for "flutterin" dem "eye~lip'Z", acne~kid I'll snap~ya~rib'Z, you fucka'Z "dribblin so much shit when u talk" you should be "born~wit~damn~bibs!"// (21)...

*dammmmm....* let's hit these fucka'Z wit another nine bar'Z...

YO! ---A.V bringin~war "raise~tha~alarm" and "alert~tha~law", wit these 'nine~bar'Z' I'll 'inflict~scar'Z' that stop more "Chinese~Hearts~than~SARS"// (22)
"Born~wit~paws" I'll "take a swipe at'cha face", "engrave~5~line'Z" you'll think you just been "sliced~by~blade'Z"// (23) 
"Jackin~more~green" than "raids" there's "fear" on~tha~block, when it all kick~off you bitches stay more "under~cover"...than a "COP"// (24) 
Ma boy'Z provide more "cover~than~a~cop", they've always "got~ma~back"---like "ma~spine'Z" a "Nokia~Facia" that can be "De~tatched"// 
(nokia detachable back covers....rest should be easy) (25) 
Ya frame'll be collapsed, if ya ever think ya can compete wit tha 'vebal'Z that~I~spit', they don't call me 'AvAiTiOn' for nothin dumb~shit, I'll leave ya "dead carcus" in "a~ditch" and "fill~it~wit~piss"// (26)
....This is stupid like Wu~Tang,...people call me a "Christmas~Tree" coz I just "stand~stiff" and let ma "balls~hang"..........ahhhh man....it's over, I've finished *Big Breathe....*// (27).....

Datz Sumthin I Did On Rmf Under Tha Name Az Avaition But I Hav Changed Names Now...

...Rank Me...

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Lyrikill-Pain Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 16 July 2006 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 3	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lyrikill-Pain Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: ...Rank Me... - Rank: Ama Posted: 16 July 2006 at 7:35pm
	Let'Z Jus Free~Style Sum Shit !~!Up!~! YO! It'Z Avaition I'm "verbally~hazardouZ", I'll leave ya word'Z "lyriKally~murdered" and stabbed~2~death, at~best--you'd be, "leakin~letterZ out'cha~chest" and "throwin" a "fit" like a fuckin "tossin~epilepse"// (epilepsy has fits and tossin is another word for throwin) (1) *"DJ'z" afraid of "spinin" ma shit coz it "wrecks~his~decks" - I walk about "embarrain~chicks" wit ma "buldgin~peckZ" so they coverin~up their "cup'Z" coz they can't "match~ma~rep'Z"//* *(cups = bra size) (2)* *Ya hear ya~heart "shiftin~gears" coz I got'Z it "racin", - I'm "in~patient", i'll leave ya fuckin "wasted" like an "alchohlic~patient"//* *(u change gear when u race, got his heart racin..ahh easy) (3)* *'Genius in his basement'-- I'm tha 'king~of~Multi's', I'll give ya a "longer~sentence" than "Ian~Huntley'Z"...* *(Ian Huntley killed 2 skool girls and got a life sentence, biggest murder case in Britain, and sentence...as in verse....) (4)* *OoOoOoO....Shit!....* *YO! new~stanza same enhancement, I've "always~been~ill"...like I was "born~wit~cancer"// (5)* Akon'Z tha "belly~dancer" I'm here 2 "blow~out ya~speakerZ" --- "rollin~so~good" you must think am rockin dose� "Michelin~sneaker'Z"// (michelin make tyres n they roll...pretty straight forward..) (6) Puttin~together~peices but "LAPD covered his tracKs", who tha fuck ever "handed a gun" 2 "Davey~Mack?" (Suge!) rat~a~tat~tat now even "Cassidy'Z~blasted~da~Mack"// *(david mack accused of killin BIGGIE and tha LAPD covered up all evidence, and Cassidy has just been accused of murder) (7)* *This is RAP but you'd think were "at~tha~beach" tha amount of "shell'Z dat are dropped", fuck~it! you think I was "runnin~a~circus" tha amount of "clowns~dat~I've~mocked"//* *(shells as in shells at beach and gun shells, meanin theres 2 many shootins in rap)(8)* *"EXPLOSION!" I'm tha "terrorist of hip~hop" "bombin" you MC'z like "TnT" when ma "shit~drop" you need 2 "let go of tha mic" coz most of ya'll faggott'z belong in "Brit~Pop!"// (9)* *Ma mouth "cock'Z tha alphabet back" and start'Z "firin~meta'Z", you better have "armered~letter'z" coz dey stay "rippin~ya~into~sector'Z"// (10)* *A.V "Forever~respected" as tha "BEST~on~tha~MIC" (Mike) aKa "Corinna Schumacher" you better believe tha hype...!//* *(corinna schumacher is micheal schumachers wife - best on mic --also best on mike...as in sex...wife..got it?) (11)* *Next time you "talk~ma~name" I'm'a reach in ya mouth and pull out tha "A, V, A, I and tha "T,I,O,N" and take ya word (kill) as a fuckin "INVITATION"// (12)* *I'll "lift~ya 10 foot in tha air" "quicker~than~elevation", ma flow is amazin "100% straight~blaze", "hotter" than a "FIRE dat's fully~blazin"// (13)* *You "PUSSYz" better have "nine~lives" goin against ma verse, coz i'll "take you fucka'z out"....more times than a "mental~patients~nurse"// (14)* *I gotcha "on~ya~knee'Z" like "disabled~girls" you givin me "more~than~credit", but you need 2 pull dem panties back up coz like 'John~Leslie' "everybody~hurl'Z" when they "see~you~naked!"//* *(partner in Abi Titmuss home sex tape) (15)......* Breathe�z out... damn.... Aiiight look, I'm a balla dat, will leave "above~ya~collar" capped when I spit~from~yap, after I've layed~u~flat for talked~back, ---I'll make tha "talkin stop" when I "mute~ya~tongue", I'll "explode~ya~lung" when I "breathe~a~ton of atomic gas right down~ya~throat"// (16) *Look, ma 'new~wordz rip through~nerds' that 'act like~hurbs', coz ma 'rude~verse' will leave ya 'wack crew~cursed' wit a 'few~merks' - I 'review~hurt' and leave u like a "JEW...BURNT!"// (17)* *A.V 'switched~his~style' now I got ya'll amazed 'in~vile' wit a "lopsided~smile" ,// (18)* *I'll fire a "thunder~bolt" when ever I hear u "poppin~wit~shotz", you "couldn't be me" if u requested my "cloned~corpse" for "your own~source" i'ma 'known~force'// (19)* *Tha gun~lifts and I've 'stunned' like 'Post~War', eveythin comin out ma mouth is "sick" - like I've "kissed a thousand bitches wit cold~sores.."// (20)* *I'll lay ya flat on ya 'own~floor' for "flutterin" dem "eye~lip'Z", acne~kid I'll snap~ya~rib'Z, you fucka'Z "dribblin so much shit when u talk" you should be "born~wit~damn~bibs!"// (21)...* dammmmm.... let's hit these fucka'Z wit another nine bar'Z... *YO! ---A.V bringin~war "raise~tha~alarm" and "alert~tha~law", wit these 'nine~bar'Z' I'll 'inflict~scar'Z' that stop more "Chinese~Hearts~than~SARS"// (22)* *"Born~wit~paws" I'll "take a swipe at'cha face", "engrave~5~line'Z" you'll think you just been "sliced~by~blade'Z"// (23)* *"Jackin~more~green" than "raids" there's "fear" on~tha~block, when it all kick~off you bitches stay more "under~cover"...than a "COP"// (24)* *Ma boy'Z provide more "cover~than~a~cop", they've always "got~ma~back"---like "ma~spine'Z" a "Nokia~Facia" that can be "De~tatched"//* *(nokia detachable back covers....rest should be easy) (25)* Ya frame'll be collapsed, if ya ever think ya can compete wit tha 'vebal'Z that~I~spit', they don't call me 'AvAiTiOn' for nothin dumb~shit, I'll leave ya "dead carcus" in "a~ditch" and "fill~it~wit~piss"// (26) **....This is stupid like Wu~Tang,...people call me a "Christmas~Tree" coz I just "stand~stiff" and let ma "balls~hang"..........ahhhh man....it's over, I've finished Big Breathe....// (27).....** Datz Sumthin I Did On Rmf Under Tha Name Az Avaition But I Hav Changed Names Now... ...Rank Me...

Lyrikill-Pain Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 16 July 2006 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 3	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lyrikill-Pain Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 16 July 2006 at 7:52pm
	Anythin????

ILLSTARRR Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote ILLSTARRR Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 16 July 2006 at 9:31pm
	ama
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DressToKill Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote DressToKill Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 16 July 2006 at 10:19pm
	Man gotta loose the font...hella hard to read I cant even rank yah
	The original comeback kid

Lyrikill-Pain Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 16 July 2006 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 3	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lyrikill-Pain Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 July 2006 at 7:24am
	Ok I'll Change In A Bit...

Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Stalin Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 July 2006 at 7:47am
	word at ama, some good lines but the font is killin it, gotta make it easier to read, also structure ur verse better, put it in poem form u know?..like this, also take out all the "paranethesis" ppl on this site can spot wordplay, we dont need it pointed out, and take out the ~ and - just have the verse no decorations, im not hatin it might seem like im tell u everythnig is bad but im just lettin u know how we do it round here *YO! It'Z Avaition I'm verbally hazardouZ, I'll leave ya word'Z lyriKally murdered and stabbed 2 death, at best you'd be* *leakin letterZ out'cha chest and throwin a fit like a fuckin tossin epilepse//* *^see when u do it like this, u see how uneven ya bars are? You wanna keep them close to the same length, itll help the flow majorly.* *stay active and if u got any questions, theres a forum where u can ask questions.*

Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 July 2006 at 5:55pm
	make ya font a lil bigger too


Lyrical Mind Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 June 2006 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 630 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-27-2 Form: LLLLNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lyrical Mind Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 July 2006 at 6:20pm
	low ama ......nice punches...and structure only thing leth im down was his font and size ..and colourin..and i dont think he has to explain everything most people know what cups mean ...when u mentions titiz ..and tossin for throwin
	Dominance beyond your grasp That life you talk, I walk the path/ I rip lames, give cause for casts I spit flames, like rocket packs

I-kontinue Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote I-kontinue Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 July 2006 at 6:59pm
	Ama.. fix ya structure...

2smooth Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote 2smooth Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 August 2006 at 12:11pm
	low AMA

Scotty32 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10491 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Scotty32 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 August 2006 at 1:02pm
	locked on ama
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