Heat Wave: HW Text (Rd 1): Rutter v Brenn |
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Cuba 
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 Topic: HW Text (Rd 1): Rutter v BrennPosted: 02 August 2015 at 8:25pm |
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Best of 3 votes from JUDGES Straight battle round Both battlers will diss MISSION as he no showed. |
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Cuba
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Posted: 02 August 2015 at 8:26pm |
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Rutter
Fuck his religion of forgiveness, i say violence is the answer Tonite i'm lighting up this christian in a box like its isis propaganda, Dude can sing along to his beatdown, as punches end the life of this chump Facing an R'N'B masterclass, mish'll die trying to ride with these hooks, ...And Since I'm old, testament to my wisdom i'll cut n spill this youth Cos in this church, closest he come's to killin it, is having the look of Dylan roof. Ya preachings done, playin gods son u gettin u peeled on the cross Any fan that pro Zak'll need a double prescription just to deal with the loss, We watched HG kickin you, but comedy wise- misfits decline was better Truth is, u'd be back ridin solo if boom bap needed more than a mic to enter, Stuck livin that chastised lifestyle, bitches shoot u down n ya eyes swell Those love songs aren't fire, it just burns ya whole life's been a dry spell, And kamry magee - she mad grizzly, why this spaz think to share that If Mish ever ride that bear back, she carrying him as part of his care pack, Barely noticed you gone ghost, never been anything sold about ya text bro laying down concrete facts, you were always the stepping stone to next bloke. |
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Posted: 02 August 2015 at 8:27pm |
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Brenn
I spit cold send M a(emma) stone thru the grill This your Life? to me its a hobby-man... Funny how I have to go thru this clown with a hammer turn it into zombieland... Lets get it.... We can box but if the fist 'miss I'le' Bomb your whole base... Then we see what ur Fort Worth after i piss a hole in your face! Zack is no mission he's an easy target theres no missin Facts... I call him Bruce Jenner cause I can see the Miss in Zack... Zack a thief? Swagger Jackin? These I don't like to speak up on... But everyone knows the Mission get dropped when the heat is on... Ill poke holes in your character Mission-airy He's armed to shoot hooks... But I twist his spine and fuck up his whole potion like Karma Sutraa Books. Lets get personal... This bitch a preacher? Hes a real artist God keeps his message the best blessed!
<---real quote How you gonna let another Man monitor your Art? Then claim you the rawest? Bitch you got pimped out from the start! Mission I hate your whole ora from your face to you style... I hope you get hit by a car but don't die until you choke on your own bile! SYN IN THE BUILDING!!!! |
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Posted: 05 August 2015 at 8:56pm |
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Firstly just wanted to say I started reading this having forgot Mission no showed and I was like who the fuck is zack? Haha...anyway.
Rutter, love the aggression from the get go it was all out abuse and I love that. Jeez that Isis line was dope as fuck. Damn that Dylan Roof line was angry as shit! I loved it though, it's relevant and a nice punch. That boom bap bar was funny shit, destroyed his crew history there. I gotta be honest towards the end of the verse you started to lose momentum a bit, I weren't feelin the last 3 bars as much as the ones that came before them. Still, the majority of this verse was written to a very high standard. Brenn, you need to start using some commas my man, for example "hammer, turn it into zombie land" it helps the flow. You had some nice lines in there, the karma sutra line was nice and I liked some of the wordplay you used early on. If I'm honest, nothing made me think damn!!!! In fact towards the end it got very basic and the kind of stuff you hear from rookies, like that bile line, wasn't feelin that. I've definitely seen much better verses from you, try and be more aggressive and work on developing personals into better punches. Winner: Rutter. This dude has turned into an absolute beast of a battler. JBrenn just came up against the wrong dude here I'm afraid. |
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Posted: 05 August 2015 at 10:44pm |
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Rutt
Thought you came out strong in the opener and the setup was relevant nice work. Second bar didn't work for me and the end rhymes felt a little forced. Third bar was some stellar wordplay I thought this was hardhitting. Fourth bar I have mixed feelings about; it was a creative punch...thought maybe the wording could have been a little better...Fifth bar was nuts good personal and very effective; Sixth bar is the same another haymaker with good wordplay. Seventh bar flowed well but was tame especially compared to some of the other punches. Closer was decent; nice stiff jab to put the icing on the cake. Overall pretty solid verse with very few miscues. Nice work Brenn Opener was a nice set up bar nothing hard hitting but it set the tone for the verse nicely and was a good concept. Second bar was nice; putting relevant wordplay in the opener and in the following punch is not easy; nice work here. Third bar was a light jab; just because anybody coulda fit in that punch; fourth bar was a statement, i woulda liked to see a punch that tied into that idea; fifth bar I assume you meant position, nice punch and good tie in with the opener again. Sixth bar was hard and it was dope how you used his own quote and tied it in with your opener. Seventh bar was a statement but I felt it hit hard enough to get away with it after tying it with the previous bar. Closer was just a way to go out on a grimey grusesome note lol. Nice shit. Overall a close and hilarious battle both emcess did work; I would have to edge it out to rutt he had some haymakers that did some heavy damage; possibly one of rutts best verses ive seen. brenn you did you thing but you had a couple of dry spots in your verse that i thought gave rutt the edge. Mvgt Rutt Nice shyt syn fam!!! |
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Posted: 05 August 2015 at 11:26pm |
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Rutter advances to round 2 and will face Arthur
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Mission wrote: