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    Posted: 31 January 2010 at 11:24pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 February 2010 at 10:05am
round two platinum vs scotty_32
scooters the wackest at running 'movements for rappin' his site
compare me to 'termites' platinums 'chewing the bracets' tourny bracets
shoot ya with gatlins, your round three future is lapsin
because the way i see it, you just a LOSER with admin
infused with a battlin skill that is terribly weak
its 'magic'
on 'LA' that '32' isnt already feeling the 'heat'
someone
need to show scotty how deep his throats clotting
he wont make it past this round ...
'cos like 'broken heart monitors' he is 'beating nobody'
except for rapdisup but hes is wack as fuck
'saving files to hard drives' the only time he 'back it up'
plus plats a savage, there will be no steppin before me
take a seat or lend a hand, help out nep with the tourny
lazy boy or rafters, take your pick 'admin'

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 February 2010 at 11:16pm
Fuck goin for Gold, am goin after Plat
Made it to round 2 but u cant step to Matt
You think your a pro? I'm the one with the KO
Your only here because a herb failed to show!
So eager to win, the celebrations begin
Sponcerd him self, shame his chances are thin
Takin down this false idol like David did Goliath *
I dont need a miricle when ya failed to suprise us
Surely you aint even tryin, Cose how do ya expect to win
when your biggest insult is that am the fuckin admin
Its gotta be embarrassin that my verse trumps yours
When I only signed up to boost the numbers


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 February 2010 at 1:01am
Plat...opener is pretty weak, second bar is a bit blahh, too... loser with admin a pretty poor punch...LA Magic shit was nice, beating nobody bar was nice, back it up bar was nice, closer was hot. Scotty, opener was poor, second bar was brilliant, 3rd bar was pretty weak, next bar was not bad, not amazing, last 2 bars were pretty decent scotty, with the closer actually being a fucking decent bar.

A much, much closer battle than I thought, I think plat, like rap, underestimated Scotty, who I swear must be getting help, or some shit, because he's unleashing some hot bars. In the end, plat takes this, JUST. I mean, JUST. A little more consistent, with a couple harder punches than scotty.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 February 2010 at 1:31am
Plat had better rhymes and better flow. The punches were pretty weak though, aside from the one where you say he's beating nobody. Then you turn around and diminish it by mentioning that he beat someone. Scotty's verse had three good punches, but that was enough, and it had some truth. Plat's verse had too much about Scotty running this site. I expected much better from someone with a 10-1 record. It was close...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 February 2010 at 3:46am
i think Scotty's verse was coo....he had tha NO SHOW line that was nice to me
 
but Plat, maybe he did focus more on him bein tha Admin but at tha same time i feel tha his punches was more on point.....so ima havta give this one to Plat
 
 
Vote: Plat
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 February 2010 at 5:32am
PLAT-
scooters the wackest at running 'movements for rappin' his site
compare me to 'termites' platinums 'chewing the bracets' tourny bracets
^^
Good opener and personnel-
shoot ya with gatlins, your round three future is lapsin
because the way i see it, you just a LOSER with admin
^^
I enjoyed this bar just for the pure diss. Beings that hes admin-
infused with a battlin skill that is terribly weak
its 'magic'
on 'LA' that '32' isnt already feeling the 'heat'
^^
Ha ha this made me chuckle, good punch-
someone
need to show scotty how deep his throats clotting
he wont make it past this round ...
'cos like 'broken heart monitors' he is 'beating nobody'
^^
Not much of a personnel to me but not bad personnel wise-
except for rapdisup but hes is wack as fuck
'saving files to hard drives' the only time he 'back it up'
^^
I thought this was pretty clever punch also good choice of multis towards the end of these two lines also internal rhymes-
plus plats a savage, there will be no steppin before me
take a seat or lend a hand, help out nep with the tourny
lazy boy or rafters, take your pick 'admin'
^^
I didnt really like the self hype on your closer, so.. Ehh Confused


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Fuck goin for Gold, am goin after Plat
Made it to round 2 but u cant step to Matt
^^
I enjoyed your opener with the resemblance of the two metals. Good nameplay and personnel-
You think your a pro? I'm the one with the KO
Your only here because a herb failed to show!
^^
Not much really to this, but it was an ok personnel-
So eager to win, the celebrations begin
Sponcerd him self, shame his chances are thin
^^
Ha ha this made me chuckle a bit. I guess we'll see what happends after the tournament-
Takin down this false idol like David did Goliath *
I dont need a miricle when ya failed to suprise us
^^
I wasent feelin this to much, seemed more of a filler to me-
Surely you aint even tryin, Cose how do ya expect to win
when your biggest insult is that am the fuckin admin
^^
I thought this was probably your best personnel against him besides from the platinum and gold line on your first bar-

Its gotta be embarrassin that my verse trumps yours
When I only signed up to boost the numbers
^^
Didnt like this closer much and like I said on plats verse Im not one to care for
self hype-

I didnt really enjoy either one battle as much as I thought I would being that they were wrote by two very good emcees. Iv read pretty good material from both ya'll. But I didnt go through and explain the bars for nuthing therefore my vote goes to... 
PLAT-
No hate fellas but do it again sometime..

                     
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 February 2010 at 9:32am
thanks, self hype 'can be' used as another aspect in battle. the way i see it, if your battling someone, your trying to lower your opponent to a level thats below yours right?  (as punches do)
but self hype 'now and again' can raise your side of the field rather then lowering your enemys (resulting in the same effect) just in a reverse way of looknig at it.

over use of it in battle (like nameplay in my chain battle) can result in a negative (where your mind set is now turtle)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:45am
3-1 Plat, vote up.






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:56am
Gotta agree with jehu on this one....Close battle but i expected alot better from plat and no disrespect to scotty but he come alot better than i expected him too and as nep said he suprisingly had some real nice punches haha The only person plat had was the face scotty is the admin which isnt really a punch?....Iono i just enjoyed scoots verse more and felt the punches landed more

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 February 2010 at 8:02am
damn good battle...... i wasnt gonna vote on this mainly bcuz of how close it is but i think i decided the solid winner...


Bar 1
Scotty - 2/5
Plat - 3/5
both not good openers but plat got the extra point for the multi which did help a bit

Bar 2
scotty - 4/5
Plat - 2/5
scotty takes it for the better diss

Bar 3
Scotty - 1/5
Plat - 4/5
really good punch from plat with the originality of it

Bar 4
Scotty - 2/5
Plat - 4/5
Another hard hitting punch from plat

Bar 5
Scotty - 3/5
Plat - 3/5
Alright disses from both plat prolly wudda got  more but i must be missin something cuz i dont understand the 'Back it up' part

Bar 6
Scotty - 4/5
Plat - 2/5
Scotty prolly would have got a 5 but the rhyme was a lil off to me....im guessin you meant it to be pronounced "yurs"

Scotty - 16/30
Plat -18/30

overall like i said a close battle to the end but i jus feel plat came a little harder and his verse flowed sumwhat better.....

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 February 2010 at 5:37am
back it up / back your files up - so you dont lose them, save them to another hardrive

4-2
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 February 2010 at 11:55pm
4-2 Plat, lets get some final votes in this battle please...






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 6:25am
plat , a bit basic, flow was nice but the punches were a bit soft,"beat nobody' was a nice attempt but most didnt really hit, some not even making a lot of sense/incomplete " just a loser with admin"

scotty - pretty basic as well but i felt your punches where a little more direct and hit a bit harder the ko/no show punch, the admin reply (even though im not a fan of feeding) And your closer was funny


vote - scotty.



If this was an open mic, sure no doubt Plat takes it, but in a battle punches are the key, and how some of you can say plats punches where better than scotty's is beyond me.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 4:36pm
I think this is a very tough one to call, a lot of it is to do with expectation...you expect Plat to drop better than he did and you expect Scotty to drop worse than he did, does that make Scotty the winner? Hard to say...

Plat had a smoother flow & good rhyming, and although he didn't have the most direct punches in the world, he did still have them...chewing the brackets was coolio, saying you're going to advance & crush opponents along the way...heart monitors was a bit simple for my liking & was generic, same with the hard drives...decent personal with the Magic punch, liked the closer, and that was about it...if you're going to use a generic diss I'd try and make it more impressive in the future, or just do your homework better...

Scotty, you did have some pretty simple punches yourself...though they were at least a bit more direct, opener was filler, no show one is simple, chances are thin is bit too vague for me...was ok, could have used that better...false idol was a decent idea for a personalised word play, but don't think I'd say Goliath was an 'idol' so kind of didn't work, surprise us was a good idea but not worded greatly, admin flip was good...but equally, you'd not had much better to that point either...closer was coolio, though the rhyme was a bit dodgy...I liked the idea 

Overall, I think Plat shades this one...opportunity was there for Scotty but he didn't quite hit hard enough or consistently enough to convince me he deserved it, if he'd came with 5 solid punches & a fairly heavy one it would have been an easy decision, but he didn't so I'm going with Plat...though this really shouldn't have been this close

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 4:59pm
Plat advances. At last. Thanks for votin' folks.






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