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    Posted: 24 February 2010 at 4:53am

8 lines(or as some say, 4 bars)

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3-0 ko
 
i'll drop mine tomorrow b/c i aint gotta work.... get witcha soon
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Form: WLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 February 2010 at 7:34am
cool, ill drop soon as you do.
Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now
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Form: WWLWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 February 2010 at 2:46pm
cool iCeZ I'm droppin mine today. had to do that verse for Sass before I started on somethin else. But mine will be done today
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Form: WWLWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 February 2010 at 4:56pm

You’re dead meat and I’m the vulture, you’ll get ripped like hulk’s shirts

He says he’s ill, well he can use my dick for throat cultures

I’d beat Icee(I-C) E-Z, unless ya crew jus has to hate

I spit fire and brimstone to make that ass evaporate

Your reign(rain) is over, *Sonnin’(sun) him after his precipitation

Ya ‘ass will end up on the bottom’, An I don’t mean ‘mules that sit in basements’

I steady drop ‘def bars’, you only spit ‘dumb rods’

Your rap skill set is about as ‘well rounded’ as ‘Sponge Bob’

 

Sonning-teachin him like a father (didn’t know if people use that term in the UK)

 

Your turn homie
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Form: WLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 February 2010 at 7:14am
 
 
 
 
I’m splitting this dudes jaw, than maybe choose an arm lock

While hitting the snooz more than a lazy dude and his alarm clock

Think U can fuck with me, and it will be a permanent snoozer

U don’t want to fuck with ice, ask that Georgian luger

The way I’m putting the pen to snooz ya’ll be aching, fuck

The way I’m putting and end to snooze, call me ‘waking up’

Seriously, with these hits, you’ll be bound to have a scar
Plus there’s more consistence bars in ya fucking avatar
 
 
 
 
Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now
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Form: WWLWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 February 2010 at 5:23pm
HAHA good shit... let the voting beginClap
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Form: WWLWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 March 2010 at 3:58pm
upping for votes...
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Form: WWWN 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 March 2010 at 5:22pm
crew votes allowed?
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)
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Form: WWLWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 March 2010 at 12:18am
sure cuzzo
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Form: WWWN 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 March 2010 at 11:24pm
$nooz

You’re dead meat and I’m the vulture, you’ll get ripped like hulk’s shirts
He says he’s ill, well he can use my dick for throat cultures

flow was ok, punch was weak though, kinda fillerish

I’d beat Icee(I-C) E-Z, unless ya crew jus has to hate
I spit fire and brimstone to make that ass evaporate

better than the first, doesn't hit hard but at least there's a nameplay

Your reign(rain) is over, *Sonnin’(sun) him after his precipitation
Ya ‘ass will end up on the bottom’, An I don’t mean ‘mules that sit in basements’

ooh that wasn't good, you really tried to force the wordplay and it didn't work well at all

I steady drop ‘def bars’, you only spit ‘dumb rods’
Your rap skill set is about as ‘well rounded’ as ‘Sponge Bob’

weak closer, flow was ok but the punch was indirect and kinda a weak play, you need to come much harder

overall

You have a nice flow to your stuff but your wording and delivery could do with a bit of work. You need to come more direct and hard with your punches, insult the guy, tear him a new one, clown him, whatever, just come at HIM not use obscure or forced wordplays because that won't cut it.

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I’m splitting this dudes jaw, than maybe choose an arm lock
while hitting the snooz more than a lazy dude and his alarm clock

ok opener, nothin too hard but the naemplay worked and it flowed nice with a fair delivery

Think U can fuck with me, and it will be a permanent snoozer
U don’t want to fuck with ice, ask that Georgian luger

filler/self-promo more than a diss, leave it in open mic

The way I’m putting the pen to snooz ya’ll be aching, fuck
The way I’m putting and end to snooze, call me ‘waking up’

set-up was weak, the repetition at the beggining of the bars lost some flow/delivery points, another semi-ok nameplay, you got better than this

Seriously, with these hits, you’ll be bound to have a scar
Plus there’s more consistence bars in ya fucking avatar

weak closer, ok attempt at a personal with the avatar diss but again the filler was weak and your punchline suffered due to the poor grammar, should've been "consistent" not "consistence"

overall

Flow was on, couple ok/semi-ok punches, some weaker shit, you got way better than this shit and you know it

CONCLUSION

Both had decent flow, $nooz needs to work on more direct punches and lay off the forced wordplay, IceZ came with a more rounded, focused verse with more punches so he takes it. Both can do better

My Vote = IceZ
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Form: WWLWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 March 2010 at 4:20am
good feed styles... uppin
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Form: WWLWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 March 2010 at 5:04am
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uppin for votes.. would really love to close this
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Form: WWLLLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 March 2010 at 9:16pm
Snooz- Weak opener didn't like it. Second bar was alright I liked it.  Next bar was alright.  Set up was good..but finish fell off.  Weak closer...sponge bob..i don't think so.

Icez- Opener was good..clever.  next one was decent..like that luger line..even though it was harsh for tha luger.  Next line was clever also..but tha closer was weak.

Icez GMV
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Form: WWLWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 March 2010 at 8:44am
lol yea i was goin for comic relief lmao
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Form: WLWLWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 March 2010 at 5:05pm
Snooz... wordplay was okay... but punches were not original or aggressive enough...

IceZ... nameplay was repetitive for such a short battle...  Setups for punches were weak... but the actual punches were good...

Vote: IceZ...

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Form: LNWWLW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 March 2010 at 5:07pm
3-0 Icez.. Good battle between u 2..
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