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Scotty32 
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 Topic: Point Blank v Stalin [Text]Posted: 16 July 2007 at 2:35pm |
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10491 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 31 July 2007 at 1:18pm |
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Point Blank:
* If You've Seen / Read Harry Potter You Should Get This. S = Slytherin . Gryffindor And Slytherin Hate Eachother.
** DevanX Is Above Him In The Ranks. Hes Unknown (Well, I Dont Know Him)...And Even His Battle Form Thing Says Unknown
Scousers Used To Be Sterotyped With A Curly Afro An Muzzy. If You Google Scouser It Will Probably Come Up And Look Like The Pic I Linked To. Wont Stop Till This Little Whores A Stiffened Corpse Coz LA 'Hates S' More Than Members Of Gryffindor* Ill Spit It Raw To Make This Vet Fall Behind So Jus Watch Me Stick My 'Bars To S' Like A Dollar $ign I Got Hotter Lines, So This Motherfucker Will Suffer Din't You See What Happend When UK N US Started Punchin Eachother?? Stop Stutterin Sucker,Your A Dumb Cunt Who's Every Punch Is Basic If You Cant Take It, Ill Put The Metal To Ya Temple Like A Monk With Braces Your A Punk, Just Face It, Its A Fact That You Suck Dude I Mean, You Even Got 'Unknown' Rappers Above You!** This Goes For All Of US : How Are UK Gon' Fear Ya Words,When.. You've Been Runnin For 4 Years After A Man With A Beard An Turban ? (Osama) Yankee Queers Are Hurting,As Brits Will Blaze Your Raps Coz Punching Aint Your Think, Just Stick To Swingin Baseball Bats Wars Over,Now Nobody Listens To Stalin So No Point Tryna Be Louder But I Still Wanna Know Why This American Russian Looks Like He's A Scouser  Tho I Got To Admit Ya's Are Phat(Fat), I Mean Even Kids Are Heavyweights In America! Since The Fact That We Gon Win Cant Get Round To This Vet I'll Show How We Brits Do It And ����� Ya To Death |
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10491 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 31 July 2007 at 1:23pm |
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Stalin:
Yo...I might be rusty but your nothin blud u fake cats'll be cryin like "Stalin fucked me up" you cant beat me, you need to let go of joints ill leave rappers gaspin from the way I flow on point sick of wack raps so expect US to murk these UK cats have the voters like "You Got Served" like B2K's back actin ill, your young ass couldnt be lyin more dude If my son was alive he'd be able to drive before you He embarrasses himself, I aint even gotta try to rip him If I do, his parents'll be missin point blank like blinded hitmen come on kid, ya parents cant even leave without a babysitter Ill give u nightmares that'll make ur mom have to stay up wit ya i can get furious so seriously fear me lyrically before im in ya crib wit a barrel like beer deliveries Frank White and XTC is cool, but the rest is not theres no point to empty threats, if blanks the best youve got fuckin punk ass kid, bet u cant swim, u gotta hold somethin but ur surrounded by flows u cant handle like ur whole country my team is lyrically better but come on represent when Im done, everyone'll forget point like run on sentences |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 31 July 2007 at 2:03pm |
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Nice Verse Stalin, Should Be A Close One
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 31 July 2007 at 3:40pm |
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Yea, nice battle...
Point - I felt you were quite inconsistent wit' ya punches here. i mean yea, you had a few dope punches, (Monk with braces bar was hot as hell) but the majority of ya verse was poor by your standards. I'll point out a few that i thought were innefective...
Ill Spit It Raw To Make This Vet Fall Behind
So Jus Watch Me Stick My 'Bars To S' Like A Dollar $ign Yankee Queers Are Hurting,As Brits Will Blaze Your Raps
Coz Punching Aint Your Think, Just Stick To Swingin Baseball Bats Since The Fact That We Gon Win Cant Get Round To This Vet
I'll Show How We Brits Do It And ����� Ya To Death Basically, the money swindle is poor. its cheap, (excuse the pun), and its not worth its salt. no doubt you had a hot flow and hot multis through out, as usual, but the weight behind your punches isnt nearly as good as it needs to be. The baseball bats bar i dont understand why you would use it. i dont know how you would think to yourself that the punch is hot. its indirect. i see what your trying to do with it, but the wordplay was a miss, as was the punch. The few personals you had wrapped up in ya verse were nice, funny, and more to the point than the majority of ya bars. And although it was a nice verse, it was too inconsistent.
Stalin - straight up i thought your verse was gonna be shit. the opener is why. its basic, its poor, its indirect, its worthless. in a battle where your openent is gonna come strong, you gotta make sure you use every bar to full effect, and you really didnt here. from there on out though, i was heavily impressed with what i read. aside from the B2K / Young driver bars, you were very consistent with good and great bars. flow on point / blinded hitmen / beer deliveries really hit home for me, and pretty much took the battle without question. the others i havent mentioned are still good, nice wordplay, and the verse was filled with some quite relevant newish name play, which we always like to see. Basically ya verse flowed hot, nice punches, consistent and a good read.
Overall - pretty one sided in my opinion. Stalin got this hands down. He came harder. theres nothin' else to it.
Stalin GMV.
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Fatal
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Posted: 31 July 2007 at 8:33pm |
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Point Blank: This verse was a let down man...ya flow was good and your transistional rhymes were good....started off poorly...wasnt feelin the harry potter punch (and yes i do understand it)...jus wasnt a strong punch...at first i didnt like the dollar sign line but when i thought about it, i felt it was creative...tyson/holyfeild punch was ok, nothing spectacular tho...monk lines was dope tho, tight line...unknown rappers line was ok but had it been worded better would of came off harder...osama line was huge miss...baseball line wasnt that good...basically tha only other hard punch was the heavyweight kids line...rest was average or missing... Stalin: Again not a strong opener...second bar wasnt that strong either...b2k line was ehhh...son/able to drive line was funny tho...blinded hitman line was good...not feelin the babysitter line...beer delivery line was cool...next line was ok...surrounded by flows line was tight...closer was tight... Overall: i was feelin Points flow/multies better than Stalins, but PB's verse was too inconsistant for me...Stalin jus had a couple harder hitting punches than Blank had... VOTE: STALIN Good Battle Tho Yall...Props |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 01 August 2007 at 4:12am |
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Ive Got Somethin To Say Bout My Verse, But I Aint Gonna Say It Till The Battles Over.
Anyway, Thanks For Votes Fatal An Nep, 2-0 S
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Kay B
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Posted: 01 August 2007 at 3:16pm |
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Point blank
Wont Stop Till This Little Whores A Stiffened Corpse Coz LA 'Hates S' More Than Members Of Gryffindor* Not bad, a nice play though i havent read harry potter so had to read the expo lol... Ill Spit It Raw To Make This Vet Fall Behind So Jus Watch Me Stick My 'Bars To S' Like A Dollar $ign Dope....real nice, dope punch and play I Got Hotter Lines, So This Motherfucker Will Suffer Din't You See What Happend When UK N US Started Punchin Eachother?? Haha nice play...punch landed Stop Stutterin Sucker,Your A Dumb Cunt Who's Every Punch Is Basic If You Cant Take It, Ill Put The Metal To Ya Temple Like A Monk With Braces HAHA dope Your A Punk, Just Face It, Its A Fact That You Suck Dude I Mean, You Even Got 'Unknown' Rappers Above You!** Not real hard hitting imo.....concepts kinda played but it landed This Goes For All Of US : How Are UK Gon' Fear Ya Words,When.. You've Been Runnin For 4 Years After A Man With A Beard An Turban ? (Osama) Dont really hit since most been looking for him....But it was funny Yankee Queers Are Hurting,As Brits Will Blaze Your Raps Coz Punching Aint Your Think, Just Stick To Swingin Baseball Bats Meh...this was ok nothing special id expect this from other members but iv seen alot better from you Wars Over,Now Nobody Listens To Stalin So No Point Tryna Be Louder But I Still Wanna Know Why This American Russian Looks Like He's A Scouser Lol made me laugh but didnt really hit Ill Grind Ya To Powder, Otherwise I Got Undertakers Waitin To Bury Ya Tho I Got To Admit Ya's Are Phat(Fat), I Mean Even Kids Are Heavyweights In America! Nice Since The Fact That We Gon Win Cant Get Round To This Vet I'll Show How We Brits Do It And ����� Ya To Death Weak...poor closer imo Overall - Not a bad verse but iv seen alot better from you and expected alot better like nep said a few ral hot bars but than a few irrelevant weak bars, topsy tervy verse definetly seen better from you. Stalin Yo...I might be rusty but your nothin blud u fake cats'll be cryin like "Stalin fucked me up" Weak opener...expect alot better from someone picked in the top 5 over others you cant beat me, you need to let go of joints ill leave rappers gaspin from the way I flow on point Nice, picked up abit here decent personal and punch sick of wack raps so expect US to murk these UK cats have the voters like "You Got Served" like B2K's back Again weak and pointless could be used against anyone, no personal actin ill, your young ass couldnt be lyin more dude If my son was alive he'd be able to drive before you Lol nice He embarrasses himself, I aint even gotta try to rip him If I do, his parents'll be missin point blank like blinded hitmen lol dope play not seen it used before come on kid, ya parents cant even leave without a babysitter Ill give u nightmares that'll make ur mom have to stay up wit ya LOL dope...him being young is kinda becoming played hopefully u not carried on...but funny lol i can get furious so seriously fear me lyrically before im in ya crib wit a barrel like beer deliveries Dope Frank White and XTC is cool, but the rest is not theres no point to empty threats, if blanks the best youve got fuckin punk ass kid, bet u cant swim, u gotta hold somethin but ur surrounded by flows u cant handle like ur whole country Dope my team is lyrically better but come on represent when Im done, everyone'll forget point like run on sentences Dope nice closer Overall - few weak punches but some real nice punches...decent verse overall Like nep said preety one sided battle Stalin had some real dope punches that took it....seen alot better from you point. Vote - Stalin |
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-Orion-
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Posted: 01 August 2007 at 3:36pm |
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Dang, thought it was a lot closer than that... tough break P Bizzle
3-0 Stalin...1-0 US I guess?
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 01 August 2007 at 5:36pm |
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Ah Well..Thanks For Vote Kay...I Didnt Wanna Say This Incase Ppl Looked At It A Different Way...But I Wrote Mine And Came Up With The Ideas An Everythin In Like Less Than An Hour, Had A Shitload Of Pressure On Me Too To Get It In Before Scotty Got Home From Work, Which Might Be Why It Seemed A Bit Dodgy. But Ah Well, Cant Make Excuses, Congrats Stalin.
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