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2smooth 
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Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
 Topic: R1-B6) stalin vs. unlmPosted: 13 December 2007 at 11:22am |
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Round One - 10 lines first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
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Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! Voting will last 1 week from the deadline... if there is no clear winner at that point, whoever is ahead at the time will advance. Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed.
If you want to bitch, take it to the Bitching Thread, or PM me DEADLINE IS MIDNIGHT, DECEMBER 20TH, 2007
if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show and not allowed entry to the next tournament
BLIND DROPS, SO ANYONE CAN DROP AT ANY TIME (AS LONG AS IT'S BEFORE THE DEADLINE  )Edited by 2smooth - 14 December 2007 at 1:20pm |
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Stalin
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Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
Posted: 19 December 2007 at 6:44pm |
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his record is 9-11 and he got ko'd in all his losses, on their crew page they start is part wit a joke bout cummin in socks or somethin, his email is spongebob, Cristal is an expensive champagne that several rappers mention just a wack cat, no question my rhymes'll dent him
he's the biggest tragedy to the U.S. since 9-11 time to tell em nothin you're rambling is dope the weakest crew here see's this man as a joke plan to get smoked, quickly dismantle his hope this rookie got his email from a fuckin family show! u cant handle this pro, I demand ya quit I'm out to prove u aint gotta be a rich rapper to be slammin Kris got knocked out 11 times, he already bruised and swelled and I aint even gotta play wit names to give U an L |
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U.N.L.M.
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Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 2:57pm |
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Nice drop Stalin...
*St.= St.alin..St=Street, Power lines are above streets/lines above stalin...
He's falling and he'll be tocrched, you'll see look
I'll take "Stalin out of text" like misprints in a History book Hit with the left hook, and then beat him to completion Since S never gets a "W" unless it's written in Phoenician This Bro fleetin from my hits but he ain't difficult to end Cause i got "power lines" the way it goes 'over St.'s head'* Got 'em dead and your a tard, that'll get tossed for going Since I'll 'Strike Hard' making sure that "Stalin Lost" from showing Betta' be going, no one thinks of you asking who the bestest is People don't even want ya' to drop text just clean ya messages |
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sparta
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..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:09pm |
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Stalin, definitely not your best...slamming kris was good...opener was hot enough, the rest was average for you but still good, u an l wasnt great...UNLM, the phoenican punch was the best of the battle but the rest didnt quite match it...it was a good try, but some of them just missed (the street one in particular didnt have as good an effect as was intended), closer was okay...
quite a close battle actually, ive seen both of you drop a lot better v. stalin |
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dalinquent
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Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 21 December 2007 at 9:03pm |
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This was another disappointment...Both of you are dope, and can be dope...what the hell happen...verses wernt weak, but I wanted fire...lol
Stalin, verse was nice enough, wasnt no shit that made me say damn like I expected, but i guess ya rusty or something...still was good and i loved the closer...its probably not new but new to me...haha UNLM, verse was good as well...wasn't the heat you brought gainst me in the last tourney but it wasnt weak either...I was really pulling fa you, as I usually do with the underdog...but you didnt deliver like I wanted...had some good shit, some played shit but was decent This was a close one but i think imma go with...damn, hold on... was gonna go stalin but imma go unlm...could go either way... good luck to both |
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Your Daddy
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Joined: 14 December 2007 Status: Offline Points: 56 |
Posted: 21 December 2007 at 9:08pm |
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stalin.. was feeling the opener, 2nd was ok, landed anyways. din really like the third bar forth was the best so far n the last was best of the verse, nice play.. fluid flowin thruout, none of the bars were wasted with filler tho the 3rd bar was borderline. decent enough verse. got the hits in.
UNLM - opener was aite, 2nd bare was clever n really impressed me lol at that. dope. third bar was a little bit of a stretch, althou its pretty obvious st. is street i dunno jus didn hit as hard. nice concept tho. really gppd concept on the next bar too, like the previous bar wasn hittin as hard as the concept was good, i liked it tho. closer was worst of the bunch tbh, overall i thought this was a cool verse n for the most part was vergin on being dope. really tight battle in my eyes, imo you both had 2 nice punchs, if not more like 2 an a half each those bein stals opener n the street bar.. i really liked unlms creative concepts, and stalin has a fluid, natural punchin style to his verse that comes off effortless n effective. hard to call. im gunna go with stalin only cause he showed more aggresion in his verse, which IMO adds to the punchs n is sumin UNLMs was lackin decent battle. not amazing but not alot between ya but MVGT Stalin |
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Im Your Daddy
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 1:24am |
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This was alot closer than it seems...nice battle yall
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mcwoods
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Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:18am |
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vote just got deleted, shit
it went something like stalin, opener solid and funny, next bar decent aswell, nice hit, wasnt feeling this bar, getting slightly played on him and wasnt worded well imo, next bar was a good concept, and closer was an original twist on a played idea, which still worked. overall good verse, decent punches, tho nothin KO and nice flow and multis unlm- opener i thought was a tight idea and play, next bar was good aswell, next one slightly stretched concept but the idea was still there, next bar was real good, played little long but the play was real nice, and closer was OK, nothing real hard hitting, still solid, good flow and nice creative punches overall - unlm GMV, had solid shots, were more creative than stalins, and i enjoyed reading unlm's verse more, seemed to attacke stalin more than he attacked unlm close battle tho. |
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 12:47pm |
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Stalin: opener was ok...flowed real good but punchline needs to be reworded..."since 9-11" doesnt really work cuz he IS 9-11, although i get where you comin from, just doesnt seemed worked properly...lol @ next bar...good hit...ive seen a couple punches like this but was worded nicely and aggresively...email is cool...ive seen this punch before too but still a nice hit cuz a spongebob emai is pretty gay lmao...slammin kris was dope...good hit...closer was nice as well...overall: was a nice verse...had a line or two that ive seen but still liked the aggressiveness of the verse and had great flow... UNLM: opener was nice...flow is off since the syllables are mismatched...see look/history book...really jus lack of experience...oh shit, written in phoenician was dope...best bar of the battle...great hit...power lines bar was a nice idea but not pulled off good...you shoulda played around wit the idea before settling on the way you used it...again flow is not great...you only rhymed the last word...shows a lack of lyricism...next bar is again a nice idea and coulda been a really hard hit, but the wordin is off...you needed to word it so that it comes off really hard...not feelin the closer, its jus not that hard of a hit...
Overall, this was a really close battle through first read...came away impressed wit unlm's verse as i expected it to be one sided...but it wasnt...stalin brought a nice verse...nothin that made me say "oh shit" but had a nice consistant hitting verse...opener is the only bar that needed rewording...more polished verse of the two...unlm brought by far the best bar of the battle wit the phoenician line and brought some original punches to the battle but failed to capitalize on them due to the wording of the punches...this is not your fault since your still improving and learning in battling but ya inexperience shows...ima give my voter to Stalin for the more consistant, more polished verse...good battle Vote: Stalin |
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 12:54pm |
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Stalin - Opener was a cool bar..well worded punch was there..decent way to open..2nd bar I wasnt feeling this to much..not alot of venom in the hit really..was lacking force..3rd I didnt get how it was a diss towards him..more directed to his emal?..4th was good..closer imo could of been better..
overall average at best..nothing standout..
UNLM- Dope opener..loved the play..2nd looked at the expo and still didnt get the bar lol..3rd was another dope play..4th was decent..could of been worded better imo..and closer seemed like a bit of a reach for a personal..
overall-Up down but when you were up..itt was good..
I gotta go with UNLM..Stalin's verse just didnt stand out to me and make me go..''shit thats sick..''..on the other hand UNLM has 2 great plays which made him take this one..nice verse's
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The original comeback kid
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Point Blank
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Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 23 December 2007 at 11:10am |
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Stalin
just a wack cat, no question my rhymes'll dent him he's the biggest tragedy to the U.S. since 9-11 Haha, nice opener, good play ... 3.5/5 time to tell em nothin you're rambling is dope the weakest crew here see's this man as a joke this was poor, bad wording and mutlis didnt match for me...2/5 plan to get smoked, quickly dismantle his hope this rookie got his email from a fuckin family show! again this was poor, u just stated a personal rather than turning it into a punch. you could have made something good out of this but never..1.5/5 u cant handle this pro, I demand ya quit I'm out to prove u aint gotta be a rich rapper to be slammin Kris Nice, 3.5/5 got knocked out 11 times, he already bruised and swelled and I aint even gotta play wit names to give U an L lmao, nice, 4/5 U.N.L.M. He's falling and he'll be tocrched, you'll see look I'll take "Stalin out of text" like misprints in a History book this was hot, well worded and strong hit...4.5/5 Hit with the left hook, and then beat him to completion Since S never gets a "W" unless it's written in Phoenician this was also a good play, 3.5/5 This Bro fleetin from my hits but he ain't difficult to end Cause i got "power lines" the way it goes 'over St.'s head'* dope idea but werent worded as good as it could have been...2.5/5 Got 'em dead and your a tard, that'll get tossed for going Since I'll 'Strike Hard' making sure that "Stalin Lost" from showing werent feelin this at all...1.5/5 Betta' be going, no one thinks of you asking who the bestest is People don't even want ya' to drop text just clean ya messages funny jab...3/5 Stalin - 14.5 U.N.L.M - 15.0 Close battle, however, stalin was a huge let down here. you seemed to state things rather than turn them into solid punches. unlm came doper than i thought he would, strong punches, an although there was a few misses, the ones that hit were hot. Congratulations UNLM Props to both UNLM GMV |
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SiNiStAh
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Joined: 15 December 2007 Location: Kingston, Ontario, Canada Status: Offline Points: 159 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-1 Form: LWLLLN |
Posted: 24 December 2007 at 7:54pm |
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just a wack cat, no question my rhymes'll dent him
he's the biggest tragedy to the U.S. since 9-11 ...good personal as an opener, props..
time to tell em nothin you're rambling is dope
the weakest crew here see's this man as a joke ...weak.. FLILLER.....
plan to get smoked, quickly dismantle his hope
this rookie got his email from a fuckin family show! ..errrm, cud'a bin flipped way betta..
u cant handle this pro, I demand ya quit I'm out to prove u aint gotta be a rich rapper to be slammin Kris ..good concept, nice personal..
got knocked out 11 times, he already bruised and swelled and I aint even gotta play wit names to give U an L ..good shit, nice nameplay, props on that.. but i cud'a seen it comin'..
U.N.L.M. He's falling and he'll be tocrched, you'll see look I'll take "Stalin out of text" like misprints in a History book ..good opener, nice nameplay..
Hit with the left hook, and then beat him to completion Since S never gets a "W" unless it's written in Phoenician ..nice shit, good follow-up.. and nice use of knowldege..
This Bro fleetin from my hits but he ain't difficult to end Cause i got "power lines" the way it goes 'over St.'s head'* ..ehhh, wasnt feelin it so much, kinda a strech..
Got 'em dead and your a tard, that'll get tossed for going Since I'll 'Strike Hard' making sure that "Stalin Lost" from showing ..good shit, i liked it, props on that..
Betta' be going, no one thinks of you asking who the bestest is People don't even want ya' to drop text just clean ya messages ..haha nice closer, props.. gud'shit..
all in all, i feel UNLM had'a more consistent verse.. if ya'll need more explaination.. hola at'em... but till then UNML GMV.. |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 17 January 2008 at 1:17pm |
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UNLM wins 5-2
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