Rebirth 2012: rd1: Poetic Assassin vs Slick

PA- nice verse. haven't read too much from you but i liked it.
punches
dna- decent
new orleans/j5- funny lol
sway/fags in gym - funny
"start over' - funny
X Hit- fuckin tuff, liked dat shit
slick is my name/ bitch in this game- very solid
joker/broker - lol not to hard hitting but funny
droppin x- ok
last 2 lines - ok
overall really solid verse

XTC-good verse with great flow and continuity
punches
assasinate poetry- ok opener. thought the 2nd line would've added more to the punch but was kinda fillerish
spoke to me/ vote for me- love how you used yourself to belittle his punches like M&M in 8mile. nice
potpouri - fuckin funny
complainin - nice and witty
chain- very nice
shame/lame- ok
j cage n nuts- -__-
dust/doper than x- dope closer lol

mvgt- XTC

both had good personals and name flips and it was very close and while PA did have some funny hits and i thought that X-Hits bar was fuckin crucial, I just thought the nice punches X landed were enough to give his overall verse (minus johny cage -__- lol) the win.

nice battle and VERY enjoyable

U already know...

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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 6:01am

ok here we go...

PA-

First off let me apologize, I'm sorry dog, if my verses for ya are too complex

Need to X plain shit to ya in steps, vexed like DNA strands wrapped around ya neck
this opener didnt hit hard enough for me, I see the X plain play and get the shape of DNA strands, but cant connect the idea together agressivly.

You simpleton, fuck'em and have his eyes tear like virgin bitches bleed

After that kat from Orleans votes for me, you be like "Man J5 must be P!"

here im thinking you need an explaination, is this because X thinks people are fake accounting?

Thats cowardice tactics, you sway votes harder than faggots in gymnastics

Then you drop to the masses askin' for a "start over" that shit was classic (Bitch Move)

Ight, calling him out on shit, my opinion is you could have went with a better set up, how faggots sway votes in gymnastics is unknown to me

I can see right through ya dog, bluffin' like a tough guy all over this net shit

Must be stuck in a maze the wrong way, all the signs be screamin' No X hit

this is clever, I like the name flip, this is the first good bar im seeing

Askin' for a New Beginning, X is finished, yelled "Slick is my Name"

But you ain't slick enough to slide a K past Ram, Y.. ..you his bitch in this game

this was ok. i see connection that is relevant.

You just a bitch who's rappin', or a rappin' bitch what is it, oh a fuckin' joker

Figured you name yourself Slick, bein' a con-artist, sorry real estate broker

Is Slick a real estate broker? if he is this works, but im doubting he' is. and if he isnt this play is mostly filler

Ain't meanin' to pop shots that hard at ya like the king of porn droppin' X

Ooops theres a drug play againts ya, I hear it now, lettin' the sway commence

Switching it up on a XTC drug play, playing it but also not playing it. its alright, i think the main idea your conveying is that slick would denounce another played drug refrence, its iight, but it doesnt yield that sting that I would expect in a tourny.

I ain't gotta take two weeks, give me a couple of minutes to handle this bitch

With my knife I'ma Slic K's off this kid , he's on some lyrical amature shit...
Closer was meh, a lil overthought is how I see it. I dunno what Slic K's really means anyway..

You finished..

XTC

With just a flip of his name i'll assassinate poetry

Not as if he'll ever grow to do anything vocally

Here you open strong, With a clever name flip and a easy following flow

Money says his verse has already been spoke to me..

like yah, I lost to Ram and cry when nigga's don't vote for me (boohoo)
I can see where Ram may have thought u flipped his verse, but it could have worked if you hadnt, Trying to nullify a future punchline you knew was going to be used. Not bad

Bitch you're a joke to me.. you ain't honestly worth it, see

Im battling with a faggot who raps about potpourri
Nice direct hit, you could call it a solid bar

This kid don't come close to me.. But i'm not restraining

Even though I GET MORE FEED THEN YOU WHEN IM JUST COMPLAINING (lmfao real talk)
Another nice one, Ive seen a few variations of this play before tho

Man i'm jus' sayin.. my styles known to be insane

Ya best credibility is HELD UP BY A CHAIN
This is alright too, dunno what else to say about it tho

Briskly put ya shame..

Then in YOUR FONT SIZE i can take my time and stretch my lines without my flow soundin lame
Found this a lil humorous, Flipping the style in the way he writes. Nice play

My AKA's Johnny Cage, I know you heard of me cuz..

..I spit some Slick shit that hits like a fist in the nuts

It rhymes alright, but its also indirect and lacked that personal effect.

Leave this bitch in the dust and let it take its effect

His hallucinations are the only time he's doper then X

closer could have came harder, I didnt get the connection for your in the dust link, but it ended average.

My votes going to XTC
For having what I feel to be more of an appropriate battle verse based on punchline that were direct hitting and self explianed

-XTC-

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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 4:11pm

Uppin..

Slick back in this shit.. time to put a hold on commotion
"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean..

..Slick..

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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 7:18pm

Here goes

Vexed/Neck: I thought this was clever but imo you couldve used a harder hitting opener

J5 must be P: this could use an explanation, I dont know what your referring too

gymastics/classic: This was clever, even though i dont know the situation your talking about I can relate cause there aint no start overs.

X Hit: this line is ill as hell, very quality word play and a hard hitting punch

bitch in this game: not as hot as the previous punch but still hits pretty well

joker/broker: nah man this was filler imo good thought though

X/Commence: this is a good prediction of slick calling the drug play played. It works well and hits well

Bitch/Shit: this was a weak closer imo, i dont know what your reffering to by slic k's, i get the name play but you couldve explained what sliccing k's means. if it means anything.

Slick:

poetry/vocally: this was a strong opener, good name play and rolls off the tongue while reading.

spoke/vote: this is good, trying to cancel out a punch that you figured was coming. Or its flipped, but i doubt youd do that in your own blind drop tourney

see/potpourri: this is hard dude, damn

restraining/complaining: this is also a solid hit

insane/chain: this is a solid hit as well

shame/lame: It sounds like you were kind of running out of ideas here imo, but it still works i guess

cuz/nuts: I get the reference, good line, but was indirect

effect/ x: alright closer, not as good as some of the rest of the verse, but good enough to close it well.

and after much thought MVGT: slick, for having more consistantly good punches. It was a hard decision, that was a dope ass battle. Thanks for the dope read both of ya

- Grimy Gómez

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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 7:37pm

Gemos wrote:

Here goes

Slick:

shame/lame: It sounds like you were kind of running out of ideas here imo, but it still works i guess

lol he stretched his lines in one of his open mics and it fucked up his flow imo.. i basically told him i could stretch mine too and my flow still stays liquid.. but anyways 'preciate the vote..

good shit PA..

3-0 for me

hanGman can you handle this

Slick back in this shit.. time to put a hold on commotion
"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean..

..Slick..

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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 7:54pm

alright nevermind then, guess i didnt catch that. great battle both of ya

- Grimy Gómez

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Posted: 10 February 2012 at 9:47am

Handled. 3-0KO XTC.

Though - don't "mod" your own battles ok..? If theres anything to be deleted/edited. message me.

"Sicker Than Thou"

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Posted: 10 February 2012 at 9:48am

Or maybe not - as I don't have permissions in this forum...

"Sicker Than Thou"

-XTC-

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Posted: 10 February 2012 at 3:55pm

hanGing wrote:

Handled. 3-0KO XTC.

Though - don't "mod" your own battles ok..? If theres anything to be deleted/edited. message me.

gotcha

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Or maybe not - as I don't have permissions in this forum...

did you hit up scotty?

Slick back in this shit.. time to put a hold on commotion
"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean..

..Slick..

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Posted: 10 February 2012 at 7:12pm

Thanks for the battle and good luck to ya in the tourny X

-XTC-

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Posted: 10 February 2012 at 7:30pm

'preciate it fam.. thank you as well for participating..

Slick back in this shit.. time to put a hold on commotion
"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean..

..Slick..

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Posted: 17 February 2012 at 9:19pm

Poetic Assassin had better flow punches wordplay and it seemed more polished to me......

xtc your verse lacked creativity and wasnt really that good..... couldnt follow your flow and punches werent that grate.....

vote Poetic Assassin

I am sicker than Sick'Wid'It

DON'T listen just picture it

HOW vivid this picture it

ME gifted and living this

NO gimmicks or images

I spit and deliver it

LIKE no one that's living shit

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