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Cee-Jay Outlaw 
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 Topic: Round 1 - Acid vs Swedish DopePosted: 05 April 2013 at 8:29pm |
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all submitted to me via pm flips will not be applicable due to the fact drops are blind Anyone can vote and all votes must be explained in detail with valid reason. Due 2 weeks from now at Midnight GMT... so that is the 19th April at 00.00am or if you want 20th April as it turns UK time. Good Luck
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Acid
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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 8:33pm |
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ahha.. ok.. check.
But how d'you know Swede's here for it?
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 8:46pm |
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he confirmed over PM
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SwedishDope
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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 6:55pm |
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Check :P
u got a lucky draw Acid, but don't you dare underestimate me ;D Stay up and good luck dude! Peace! |
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As I like to say, no such thing as "can't get no better, baadiing!" Gain no fame to stay the same!
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:48pm |
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Acid
I'd rather bomb you than you bomb yourself with stupid children, With a persona so conflicted you get used for suicidal dissing, So you wanna blow yourself up but you don't want the fame?* An internet Jehovahs Witness but an atheist, hypocritically lame, Preaching politics on dope... just like every politician spoke, We take your flyers, and then let you float back across the moat, Like you advertising rap songs on threads that noones listening to, And the dope'll kill you in the years to come unless you step to me, Because the legalisation finishes soon as you cross the sea, Either way its a dead plight, so against Capitalism you can't rap RIGHT** And he's looking like a blotch on the lyrical landscape of the site, You already got cannoned and duzted over so you couldn't reply, Now you lay in the memoirs of a rusty mantelpiece corroded by my, acid, and you say you cannot battle so you prepare a typed banter, tryna be psychological when you already got a foot in your neck, With that blunt in your head, I'll just help the Chains ensuring ya death Expos: *Swede's sig. **Strict Capitalism is left wing politics (that which Swede opposes). And the rest is explained through the links if you click them Edit: Added Links to verse
Edited by Cee-Jay Outlaw - 17 April 2013 at 6:53pm |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:50pm |
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SwedishDope
14 years long flashback, all to get on the right and wrong track. He never really did get a pass, Just flashes of ashes inside your mind, burnt out trash is all they'll ever find... Rewind time one more time, Acid better fall back, I feel inclined to decline... We learn fast, while exploring the past... Shamans that last, me&mine is soaring high, never did crash, Certified still standing tall in fact! Stand neglected, corrected and observe from a far, perfected young star?!! This gleaming fang I'd never stab in your back, I'd let it dangle and hang, where you used to stand, proclaiming that you, yourself was "The MAN!" Automatic beretta, Dan in the van, proper go-getta'! Should be enough to settle this puny vendetta, Young cattle feeling trapped? Your mind tremble&rattle, While I shatter an' batter any fake ass battler, make em' disperse and scatter! With worthy words I adapt, guess but never pretend, why don't you run and ask "one of them"?! |
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fuckoff
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:08pm |
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swedish dope wayyy off what a battle verse needs to be, flo was choppy. not one punch. acid no one listening was funny puch tho flow was gone in that bar, best line of battle tho. btw far right wing politics is tory/conservative/capitalism/facism far left is labour/cummunism/marx/freelove hippy libdem prondes vouz...
vote goes to acid.
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Acid
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:17pm |
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haha I was looking that up just in case, and I got equal arguments for both sides and it was really annoying so I was like fuck it because it works both ways :S
and thanks fuckall (man that sounds weird) appreciate it 1-0
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:42pm |
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Acid nice verse. I enjoyed your first 2 barz and the no ones listening to you punch was cool. Your flow was good and you were pretty consistant with jabs. Swedish - I just didnt see many punches coming from you man. It more felt like an open mic verse then a battle verse to me. You may wanna spend more time on your concepts and come up with someone fresh to work a punchline outta. Stay up tho fam.
Vote - Acid
good battle.
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Acid
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:59pm |
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appreciate it Trizzy 2-0
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:25pm |
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2-0 Acid
Upping for Votes
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:36pm |
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Yes acid had the better structured verse and he THREW PUNCHES. Swede you're still trying to win by writing the better lyrical verse. a battle verse needs to embarrass and piss off the opponent. it has to have that 'ooooooooooohhhh' factor with the crowd, yours didn't get there.
vote - Acid
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:37pm |
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3-0 Acid and KO
Acid Advances to the next round... Good Verses from All... Locked.
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