Open Mic: Tall Order Small Doses (feat Law & Nigma)

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    Posted: 27 May 2017 at 3:59pm

Neek:
its a minor collision inspiring writtens
the siberian, sci-fi edition of enviromental sickness
compiled files of cataclysmic lab inventions
I scrap in minutes, pens and pads are sacrilegious
rather chant my manuscripts into shattered mirrors
than collab with inferior, caponier-class cavaliers
they lack the tact, "Im poster child", my jams are feared
the camera capture, the aftermath that the fans'll cheer


Law:

If you saw smelly cheese,
You ran into endeeze


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Its Nigma The Goat
Im Bahhhhh'd to the Bone…
Neek ghost wrote that. Fact. Mask exposed.
Past orgasmic, tantric with the prose
Page erupts with paper cuts, I’m Gambit wit the throws
Catapulting stone, all survivors are perplexed by me
I covet a combination of content and complexity
Nonsense is expected, contenders can’t compete with venom
Left them on the web, sending Peter Parkers police to get em
#Bananas
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lmao@Law! 

i'm feelin some kind of way cuz i'm not included in this collaboration. i don't know why shit like this is so appealing to me but just really dug the scheme, the flow and the gymnastics of it. i want on the next one!


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Short and sweet i liked the humour here,nothing wrong with bringing smiles to ppl's
faces,Neek I liked the wording in your offering,it made this stand out overall,it gave
your verse a polished vibe,and with Law acting the minimalist here just made it work,
then Nigma on the superhero's theme was a cool inclusion too,my only gripe is its
length,this collab was over in a heart beat,still solid for what it was.. peace.   
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Neek, you have a way of using imperfect rhymes in such a perfect way because it opens up a unique way of putting words together. It may translate better in audio, but I appreciate having heard so much of your shit that I can read things in your voice in my head.

"Past orgasmic, tantric with the prose
Page erupts with paper cuts, I’m Gambit wit the throws"

5 fire emojis from the judges.

Law, that was incredible. Less is more.
Insert something rappy here
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