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Zinaii 
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 Topic: zinaii vs youngtalentedPosted: 27 August 2013 at 2:35am |
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5 bars no flipping meaning dont rebuttal off wat i say and thats pretty much it....check in and we can get this shit crackin
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YoungTalent3d
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 3:14am |
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Ok , lets go I'm trying to battle who spitting first? |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 3:15am |
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go head
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YoungTalent3d
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 4:08am |
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yo zianiii saw some of your other battles good job i really liked it
haha just playin no i didnt i was just lyin so you and your crew think you shutting shit down well see whos shutting it down when ur tied up side down hangin over a bridge, prayin that syndicate will come and save you but its to late now, havent you realized your already on the way down screemn louder, i dnt see why cuz the more you screem the less it matters bout to splatter,and shatter your whole face you shouldnt be here right now your in the wrong place mickey mouse is that way..are you ok? i see that your starting to bleed watch wat your doin ur getn blood on your feet send me to the hospital i gota a disease hurry up run to get the vaccine haha thats wat ur sayn when im done your already dead son, and ive already won! |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 4:52am |
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that was eight bars i said five but ill drop eight by tommorrow
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YoungTalent3d
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 6:28am |
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My bad I got carried away and didn't even pay attention to how many bars I wrote
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Zinaii
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:37pm |
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u r horrible; im pissed i gotta waste 8 bars on you
its like comparing xbox graphics to atari view i gotta teach u so you'll know not to come spittin at z so after this l, u shuld have a clearer picture; 3d this scandalous coward cant even handle my prowess youngs "show of talent" was mainly "amatuer hour" you're falling off, reaching no benchmarks fast wit a name reminiscent of craigslist escort ads so this lonely poser has never been known for flowing verse structure fucked up like it suffers from scoliosis u cant get around this, your styles ancient and clownish it doesnt take "eagle eyes" to see ur trash, u should pray for talent this is a cinch, even hes gotta admit that zin was a grinch even though "young was restless" this battle was missing suspense u wanna rap? nah u wont keep that thrill, leave u wit a detached grill and push young to the background like jayz adlibs (young!) |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:39pm |
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expos
he has 3d in his name eagle eyes...eagles have talons...prey...talent/talon..and yes i can make it work u dont have to pronounce the t lol |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 11:59pm |
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 3:59am |
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 5:53pm |
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bump
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 8:29pm |
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My vote goes to Zi I liked the opening with Xbox to a Atari view and the amateur hour line later on you went harder with your bars
And at yung I'm not sleeping on you or nothing but I had to pick one your bars just seemd more like threats where is Zi was attacking you more with his bars coming more at you..yung I liked the splatter and shatter your face your in the wrong place Mickey mouse is that way are you ok lines it was a funny diss not bad but that's about it good job to both you
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 11:26pm |
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Thanks I appreciate the feed back from you yeah his opening was cool .
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 11:31pm |
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no problem man
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 12:01am |
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zinaii smashed it
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 12:35am |
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Opening-zinaii
Closer-zinaii Punches-zinaii Entertainment-zinaii Creativity-zinaii Youngtalent I'll post what lines I liked from you yo zianiii saw some of your other battles good job i really liked it haha just playin no i didnt i was just lyin ^^i liked this so you and your crew think you shutting shit down well see whos shutting it down when ur tied up side down ^^this was cool Mvgt=zianii I felt u weren't hittin as hard as zinaii but u had a good verse it started of good then it kind of went downhill from there.. |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 12:51am |
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ppreciate it fellas 2-0
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 4:36am |
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Thanks for feed back appreciate . Wether I lose or win I can never succeeded if I never lost . Every loss Is motivation to do better and practice rhyming and building better vocabulary.
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Zinaii
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 4:58am |
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thats a good attitude young i got nuttn but respect for u
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 12:24pm |
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Youngtalent3d: you tried well. Actually the way i felt, your rhyme at some point, went off the flow. You gotta keep that in mind next time. And yeh., you gotta throw more personals rather than generic talk. What i mean to say is, battle needs punches that land harder than the opponent. Btw good bro
Zinaii: dawg. I loved your opening two bars. Nice flow. But the main thing, your punches were harder than young. Both ov you, keep it up!! So mvgt zinaii |
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