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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Zinaii Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 August 2013 at 11:12am
This battle has officially gone to the other side. Im gonna not look at this for a few days. And hopefully by then itll be better. And chelsea thats not how we vote on this site. You have to actually explain. Riddledan went over the limit we had set up. Soooooo how is that effort if u went over the lines we agreed to? Sorry ur vote dont count
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Originally posted by JBrenn JBrenn wrote:

is this house rules or are you allowing crew votes?


If the rules aint stated then it falls back to house rules, so no crew votes.


Also, if it wasn't obvious already chelseas vote is disallowed for being riddledan
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man im doin crew votes noob votes i dont even need to see expos lets just get this shit voted on and closed smh
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Man this guy is banned so wont waste my time ova it.
Riddle: not any hard banging personal but you did try. Fucked up structure just like your flow.

Zinaii: had punches. Good vocab and nice flow. Structure was also MUCH better than his.
Simply mvgt zin
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Yea im not expecring long expos anyway.....2-0 lets get this done wit
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I vote Riddledan because Zinaii's made zero sense, was racist, homophobic and just utter filth throughout.

It's like a Lil Wayne or Tyler the Creator standard of rap Zinaii had.
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are u riddle dan????^^^^^^^^
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No I am not.
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u sound like a clown that doesnt know anything about rapping. racist? its a battle what are u dougy snuggy lol thisll be my last battle wit a noob. if u cant understand my bars cuz ur to damn dumb then just say that idiot
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AND ur vote made no sense that was clearly a hate vote get off my dick man sorry not counting next vote please
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didn't really get either of these, weak battle, no hard punches, this battle resembled a bad girls club brawl, alot of hair pulling and scratching, if i had to vote for one, ...... i would have to say riddledan only because he came more original. not a hate vote, dont know anybody on this site so dont try to use that as an excuse..

mvgt riddledan
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2-0 Zin then huh?
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lol seemly everyone voting for riddledan.. 
either got banned... or is a duschebag and will prolly be banned in near future(madman)
as well as himself getting suspended..

coincidence?? lmao

I'll drop a vote on this in a minute... I'm doing something at the moment. 

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lmao sdot? oblock? didnt i make u pack up and leave l.a. cuz u was mad i k.o.ed u? this whole battle is completely a joke lol
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Hahaha im the only person who actually voted on this. Thanks God i voted zin. So scated right nowXD lmao
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yea this battle was waaaaayyyy 2 much of a headache
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Zinali - Opener was pretty meh.. It wasn't too good of a punch imo.. Jack Nicholson line fell short again also.. didn't think the 'hard to manage my anger' concept constitutes as a strong punch.. Nickels line was week and the flow was off.. point of power line was cool, easily the best bar you had in your verse and the dan marino line was okay but nothing real strong. Overall, idk if you just took this battle lightly or what but you've been writing alot better and your verse in this battle took a step back from that. Get back on track Zin.

Riddle - Before I even read the verse, fix the structure. No one wants to see a big blob of words on the screen. Your personals were just his records, who he lost too, and post count. With the way you worded those punches on those personals they all pretty much fell short. You need to be a little bit more creative with setting you punches up on those. Also there was a ton of choppy lines throughout your verse. 

MGVT Zinali - Better flow and better worded lines. Both of these verses needed a tremendous amount of work though. 
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I went light but if laws sayin step it up i def got to.....3-0 lets bury this in the ground and never look at this monstronsity again
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Zinaii gets the KO
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