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    Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:21am
ight here we go 10 lines asap ready when u are cuz

30 mins starts when we both say check
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:49am
bitch u gettin no respect, he likes dicks to poke his neck, yall dont believe?
before he fall to his knees and swallow sum seeds, he gets caressed by cock; u know hard on his sleeve?

thats a double entendre cuz u known for showin female traits
when he threatens people all i "hear is air" like my ears up to a seashell; wait

his bars full of more filler then decayed theeth, yal think dudes authentic?
fuck half an hour, to murk u all i needed was a new york minute

all he talk about is toting pistols and how he let the hammers go off
somebody please tell this white boy that guns is banned in new york

we dont believe u put guns to people, so stop the hard image
and since vib thinks his klean i had to mop the floor wit him


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*hes known for his rants he wears his heart on his sleeve. hard on his sleeve caressed by cock

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:57am
im high, everything i said stoned, but after ur dead ill leave ur bitch head boned
The  bitch stay next to me whenever i lay down like a bed phone
this is bad news, why did you do this z?usually, im not the one to sing songs at euologies,
but its like im singing a lullably, cuz u give me the lulz, so bye, ima give u the 'Zzz'!
denied joining his crew so he madder yall....watch as all them rappers fall
your team better speed up, time for some adderall
i knew a noob whore i could take advantage  when i said  respond in thirty minutes
but didnt expect to give your mom a  facial , the way this is a dirty finish
leave it to me to be cocky, fuck  u unless im gettin funds from you
got niggas really thinkin i'm conceited the way i S.O.N.N.E.D. ya  crew
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 3:00am
good shit mane.....bump for votes
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 3:05am
knew a noob whore would want to fuck wit klean i said  respond in thirty minutes
but didnt expect to give your mom a  facial , the way this is a dirty finish*****
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:28am
both flows of ya flows was on point,thumbs up for.....kinda liked vib.klean's better.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 11:16am
Get the fuk outta this thread and dont come back
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:13pm
lmao...ayd ayd take it easy or you myt want to settle it out on the battle ground.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:21pm
no i dont wanna "settle it on the battleground". This battle aint meant for noobs to vote on. And were not about to start a back and forth here and spam the thread. But your vote was shitty and therefore doesnt count.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:27pm
ayt ayt.......whatever, might be a noob, but lyrically....im an assassin.....
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:31pm
"and since vib thinks his klean i had to mop the floor wit him"...hahahaa!! like this line of yours....
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 1:50pm
House rules i cant vote so bumping for votes
I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 1:59pm
Vote idc who does unless its an obv troll
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:32pm
Aight ill do a breakdown later gotta give it anotjer read undecided after the first read
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2013 at 4:01pm
iight here is the breakdown....
 
 
Zin:
 
bitch u gettin no respect, he likes dicks to poke his neck, yall dont believe?
before he fall to his knees and swallow sum seeds, he gets caressed by cock; u know hard on his sleeve?
LOL The wording was odd, but the flow was nice. I saw where you were goin wit this - 3/5

thats a double entendre cuz u known for showin female traits
when he threatens people all i "hear is air" like my ears up to a seashell; wait
decent - 3/5

his bars full of more filler then decayed theeth, yal think dudes authentic?
fuck half an hour, to murk u all i needed was a new york minute
2/5

all he talk about is toting pistols and how he let the hammers go off
somebody please tell this white boy that guns is banned in new york
No real punchline here - 1/5

we dont believe u put guns to people, so stop the hard image
and since vib thinks his klean i had to mop the floor wit him
nice ending - 3.5/5
 
overall - 12.5
 
Vib:
 

im high, everything i said stoned, but after ur dead ill leave ur bitch head boned
The  bitch stay next to me whenever i lay down like a bed phone

Nah - wasnt really feelin this one - 2/5
 

this is bad news, why did you do this z?usually, im not the one to sing songs at euologies,
but its like im singing a lullably, cuz u give me the lulz, so bye, ima give u the 'Zzz'!
 
The wording was way off to me here, the punchline was flat - 1/5
 

denied joining his crew so he madder yall....watch as all them rappers fall
your team better speed up, time for some adderall
more of a statement here - 2/5
 

i knew a noob whore i could take advantage  when i said  respond in thirty minutes
but didnt expect to give your mom a  facial , the way this is a dirty finish
this was decent, flowed well -  3/5

leave it to me to be cocky, fuck  u unless im gettin funds from you
got niggas really thinkin i'm conceited the way i S.O.N.N.E.D. ya  crew
ok ending - 2.5/5
 
overall - 10.5
 
 
 
This battle was close, but I just think how sloppy vib's verse was hurt him. Wording was off a few times that made the punchline weak. Zin had some decent concepts and more jabs connected.
 
MVGT -Zin
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