Tournament Archive: FINAL Manc & Lucky D vs Nep & Calibra

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due in 5 days from this post by PM to me.  Do not post in here.
first to 3 or whoever is winning by 5 days wins.
Any explained vote counts
No shows will not be tolerated.

Goodluck

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Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	*Topic: FINAL* Manc & Lucky D vs Nep & Calibra** Posted: 20 September 2010 at 5:15pm
	20 lines each due in 5 days from this post by PM to me. Do not post in here. first to 3 or whoever is winning by 5 days wins. Any explained vote counts No shows will not be tolerated. Goodluck

Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	Posted: 07 October 2010 at 6:01pm
	Manc Expos : First line, roll through moats = castle ref. The whole Newcastle refs = black and white, Rauol Moate, Magpies, North Shields, Toon, people from Newcastle are known as Geordies and people from London are known as Cockneys. Nep = Craig, Cal = Mark. Nep got a high loss count hence taking hits like Craig List does. Nep plays a lot of COD hence fish refs like cod fillet, Neptune, haddock blah blah. BG banned then Cal took over LA Mag. "the peNneZ" is a NepentheZ name-flip. Car-toon = "Calibra" is the name of a car, and they call the city where he's from "The Toon". Last line, "N e pen the Z comes last", another Nep name flip. My appologies for the initial delay as I was laid up in hospital. Good luck to all and Enjoy When I Raoul through Moates and Nuke-castles, who's tackled? this Magpie and his chick who barely flew through 2 battles yet there in Black & White OUR evaders were scared to fight US default or BG's fault, were faced with a pair of biters utilizing Jedi Mod tricks, but I'll bust up ya force-field with hits Cal would feel if he put up the North Shields, the raw deal, all ya team couldn't rock me stop please! ya couldn't jaw-D with a cocked-knee (Geordie with a Cockney) you're not me, I mean, Mark's blatantly his mates bitch & the way HE takes hits, we should re-name him Craig List cuz mainly Craigs writtens are at best bog spillage his life is non-existent cuz he lets COD fillet (C.O.D fill it) when he aint causing haddock with Shawn & having dreams that if he bans him, Cal can run LA magazine yea, that was obviously fishy, like Nep-tunes and Marks tracks that spark laughs, & I know it's a harsh fact, but HE CAN'T RAP!! so when the peNneZ drop, this car-toon will be powerless he can't clean his act up, with nobody to shower with - so this is your lesson men, you've seen some class cuz I'm the Alpha, bet with N e pen, the Z comes last (with any pen the Z comes last) Lucky D Tha best of ya crew left..titles gone NE's been de-throned Neps response to tha Renegades sounded' like a chicken de-boned Yeah we made tha finals with two no-shows get a fuckin' clue Cal's an unarmed Hamas tha way that Jehu's killin' you Now were killin' too, bet againts us this won't be an easy win Take'em to tha Big Game leavin' Neppo still checkin' his chin Bannin' kats for postin' pics but why so serious son Writin' apologizies next what tha fuck is ya period done! (Bitch) At war with god fuck that I'm tha devil and I'm hear to expose Teamed up with tha left overs after bein' turn down by ya foes How's that make ya feel Nep? like an orphaned child I'm abusin' you Might choose to win but in this tourny winning ain't choosin' you Lettin' off a warnin' but Cal I ain't never seen ya final shot Wanted to battle Orion but a bigger challenge for him was Kos!!! Now ya both seen my curse more or less this is just a sermon If it wasn't for Canadians both of you Brits would be speakin' German Attack LI or my audios or Neeks twisted message from Manc I laugh at ya All your shit will be played worse than Englands footie out in Africa I smashed these two fools fuck both these bitches cuz I'm a Man I just hope Nep doesn't follow me around lookin' for me to ban!!! **All tha titles left NE when Renegades re-formed BigGame KO'd Nep...Nep than follow around and Banned him Cali asked Jehu to battle with him in tha tourny Orion turned down Cali..but battled Kos Nep made a pic ban..then apologized after.. Nep I ain't shootin' craps, I'm shootin' caps at this funny guy don't need to make a trip to the Vegas strip to see Lucky Die you fuckin' mites, Manc gone so long you would think he died Sweeny Todd this guy, now his guts in steak & kidney pies you on my hitlist, this guy was in ER, sick, disgusted And in his current state, I guess I shouldn't lay on the Kidney punches but fuck it I'll slam him, fuck FaceBook, you ain't Neps buddy Manc ain't really want D as his partner, he just wanted to get lucky These titles belong to Nep an Cal, we on the thrones bro, An' Manc, tell the truth, if it wasn't for me, you'd already have No Showed you hoes blow, New Era be rippin' these bastards LI a real crew? Fuck that, tell me, who wouldn't jump ship if we ask 'em we left 'em at the start line, never see these pansies' pass me Lucky was like, "yo, is this battle too big for us, they called it the Grand Finale" Lyricist Inc ain't shit, you boy gonna get murdered Lucky wants the respect of a boss but what have you done to deseverve it? I think that they finding, Nep n Cal always come sick when they writing we like Old School Dads, one hand on the belt, they know they in for a hiding the life sinking inside 'em, I place no one in text above me, Manc would do better alone, I guess you just Extra, Lucky. Cal No remorse...* Ya verses are worthless, no show and a BG ban seein' ya through So in reality Nep's done more for your tag team than either of you LuckyD was never ill but we saw him get a little sick When he watched his own members rep a different clique (NLEI) Ask Sick, Sass & Stalin, his ego met with a loss When ya the original crew claimed you were never the boss (Remeber tinychat Lucky?) They'd have rode for me over you, I'm killin' ya resistance And pretend you've never asked for my lyrical assistance (Not the 1st time) Now look at ya crew... Manc? He'll be the end of ya set He'll backstab his own to team to be a friend of the Vets (Neek ain't even like you) Won't get a shred of respect, you been missing out facts Cause we know a lyricist's ink ain't shit without Rap You ain't think about that, this battle's over now fag But first, here's some shit you ain't know about Manc PM'd Chain bout an Open, so Chain sent him a verse You saw what he wrote and you expected the worst 2 months went and past, shit you must be a fag And the very first person who's ducked a collab... ...that you asked for! So you deserve this, bitch Claim you uninspired, but dropped 4 verses since! (Ask Chain) Now give me my motherfucking belt! good luck ladies.. Vote please Edited by Stalin - 07 October 2010 at 6:24pm

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Posted: 07 October 2010 at 8:03pm
	Where is Lucky D's verse?
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Capture Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 17 March 2010 Status: Offline Points: 201 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-1 Form: LLWLNW	Posted: 07 October 2010 at 8:48pm
	Under the part that says "Lucky D"
	Lyrically Force Niggaz To Spit It Like Masturbation.....The Next Generation

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Posted: 07 October 2010 at 10:30pm
	Honestly, it's not there for me. I see 3 verses. Manc, mine then Cal.
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Cuba Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW	Posted: 07 October 2010 at 10:32pm
	That's coz you can't see him, son


Calibra Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN	Posted: 07 October 2010 at 10:39pm
	I see it.

Woneduh. Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 30 September 2010 Status: Offline Points: 192 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: WLLW	Posted: 07 October 2010 at 11:07pm
	This was like difficult to judge.. Manc forced punches and pure shit... some bars hit hard like one or two.. Then Lucky D get's on and destroys it,.. ill punches, and decent personals.. Then we have Nep... psh.... he wrote a alright verse, still weak for the most part.. A lot of bars hit hard.. and he had a few good punches.. Then cal. This is verse the battle is won.. Cal get's on a destroys lucky and makes manc and his partner nep look like shit.. Good personals, ill flow sick punches.. The votes for Nep & Cal..

Cuba Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW	Posted: 07 October 2010 at 11:39pm
	It's actually FUBAR'd on my screen to be honest...Neps, maybe if you scroll right, can you see it?


Kosmosis Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL	Posted: 08 October 2010 at 12:27am
	man this was a hot battle! i need more time to digest it...when i get done with my responsibilities i will come back and break it down and vote, if it is not already decided...props to all!!!!
	Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Posted: 08 October 2010 at 1:04am
	Yeah Cubes, if I scroll right, it's there :D
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Posted: 08 October 2010 at 3:42am
	Uppin'

Kosmosis Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL	Posted: 08 October 2010 at 1:59pm
	the entity votes: ok i must first say that i read and re read and re read this battle, and even check links..nep that craps link does not allow us to see it. now i believe all gentleman made proper war, and this was a close battle, i will simply say what i liked and disliked about each verse....and we will go from there.. manc- cons- lots of english references...which made ALOT of work to verify slang, lingo, black and white color schemes for a yank like me....just saying man...i already have a job lol...also the cod fillets was kinda forced, and thats not just becuase i am a cod fan i promise....fill it...fill "ay" is how we yanks pronounce..unsure as to how you brits do...so maybe it works for yall, but not us...sorry...it was good in theory pros- all that english stuff worked! and fit! your wordplay was ridiculous! the cocked knee...and omg that nep wordplay at the end was ridiculous! i read that and was like "man how come i never thougth of that!!?" yao ming? all in all excellent verse~! i was very impressed~~! Lucky D pros - well sir, your verse was ok...i liked how you showed jehu "blasting" cal...even though i though jehu was kinda wack....and i was loving how you brought the truth of how O would battle moi ( and get his bitch ass served~) but wouldnt battle cal...ouch!!!! especially cuz cal hates me, that was a stinger!!! well done~! cons - aside from my line, which didnt really flow!!!! (wtf!!!) nothing really stood out, i wanted blood, carnage, mayhem..i feel like you kinda softened up some of the blows, and your mid to end of your verse with the exception of my line, didnt really do it for me, it would be good enough to win a regular battle, but this is the finals...just my honest opinion...no beef... NepentheZ pros - you have a ruthless streak in you, and are not afraid to spit on your opponent after you urinate on him, if you catch my drift....that vegas line was raw (especially since i am eagerly waiting for fallout new vegas on the ps3 to come out this month, which made the line resonate even harder into my soul!) you did pretty good here!!! your disses were all pretty consistent, and some what hard! Cons - to be honest man, i felt like you destroyed lucky, but let manc ride, ya feel me? let the mans kidneys go...he couldnt help that! its kinda like i was told in my orion battle...just hitting the same punch over and over again.....one punch would have been fine...but it seemed like you had nothing to say about him! Calibra or may i call you mark lol ? pros- i must say that even though we have had beef in the past, i like the heck out of this verse! i like how you big upped your team mate, i also like how you essentially proved how bitch made and shady your opponents past actions had been, and manc you my boy and all, but cal exposed that shit about rapdisup yao ming!? and whether it was a fake personal or not, that was the kind of ruthlessness that is needed for a final!! cons - as much as i hate to say it, i didnt see a whole lot bad, about your verse, it was pretty solid man...you know nitpicking stuff...like add some more multis but really, you did fine...ruthless man. the verdict i think mancs verse was the best, and his nep name play absolutely floored me and kicked me in the ball sac....i think lucky dropped the ball.....i think nep did ok, but kinda let manc slide, but did better then lucky....i think cal dropped solid, maybe not as awesome as manc with the skill and wordplay, but certaintly ruthless enough to hang, and outshine lucky. so although i think mancs verse was the best, both nep and cal did well enough together to beat their opponents! i feel like nep and cal were a more HOMOgenous mixture (rofl!!! get it!) and did well enough in this TAG BATTLE to claim victory! no hate guys i love you all anally....take it or leave it! mvgt - craig and mark.
	Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Posted: 08 October 2010 at 2:52pm
	There shouldn't be any links at all in my verse. Stalin fucked up. :)
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Kosmosis Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL	Posted: 08 October 2010 at 2:57pm
	oh...well then that makes sense.....curse you stalin....curse you!!!!
	Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.

Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	Posted: 08 October 2010 at 3:29pm
	I didnt... for some reason those green links appear inalot of shit.. I never put em there

Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Posted: 08 October 2010 at 11:04pm
	Nice one for the vote and breakdown Kos :-) Uppin' for votes

Lucky D Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL	Posted: 09 October 2010 at 9:17pm
	Thx for votin' Kos...and personally I think Wonduh/BG/Evil/NaughtShawn/ whoever else he is vote is kinda weak IMO


Capture Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 17 March 2010 Status: Offline Points: 201 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-1 Form: LLWLNW	Posted: 09 October 2010 at 9:45pm
	MVGT : Luck and Manc Luck basically called out everything you guys would say. And the personal Cal had about a no-show for a collab because Manc forgot, how is that even a personal? Structure:NE Personals:LI Punches:LI Wordplay/Nameplay: LI Aggressiveness:NE Predictable:NE MVGT: LI
	Lyrically Force Niggaz To Spit It Like Masturbation.....The Next Generation

Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Posted: 09 October 2010 at 11:47pm
	Thanks for the vote Cap Uppin lads

Tournament Archive: *FINAL* Manc & Lucky D vs Nep & Calibra

Tournament Archive: FINAL Manc & Lucky D vs Nep & Calibra