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SwordedStylez 
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 Posted: 29 March 2015 at 8:14pm |
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Yeah that's me singing Tits, I'm a much more accomplished rock musician than I am a rapper by a massive distance haha.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Titu
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Posted: 29 March 2015 at 8:17pm |
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HAha
I never heard you sing before. But ill be honest with you, that shit was impressive. I got few beats, i need hooks on them. And what can be better than a pro singer. Also, i saw your mail. Put my shit in the waiting list :) i have all the time. Ps. Im sending you links to two beats. leme know if i should add them on my EP or not. I thought they were dope. |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 29 March 2015 at 8:20pm |
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Word man will do for real. Btw, you're only 3rd in the queue now, and I'm off work from wednesday for 5 days ;)
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Titu
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Posted: 29 March 2015 at 8:23pm |
Haha. Sounds good. And cant wait for this track.. I wonder what do you mean by "proper mixing" really.. This shit is already dope lol |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 29 March 2015 at 8:24pm |
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This is just a sketch man. I need to tighten the vox, add some punch to the kick and some warmth to the snare, then some air over the track before mastering.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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dalinquent
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Posted: 29 March 2015 at 9:14pm |
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This shit right here nigga...
This shit right here... Forget that last shit yall thought was hot, THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE MY NIGGA!!!!!!!!!!! 2 things I would say as criticism, the verb on the hook seems a bit heavy... and the bridge/outro... split it in half and record both seperately, can tell that you had to rush the first part, i.e. when u said the searching for myself the first time around it didn't drag out like it did through out the track... out side of that tho.... THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE NIGGA |
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Posted: 30 March 2015 at 12:25am |
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Awesome track guys! H4ze, the flow was dope and you totally rode on the beat man! The content and the rhymes were great too. This right here is a dope collab.
SS, man I had never heard you sing before. This hook was perfect for the song, it went in sync with the beat and conveyed the right kind of emotions that the song was about. Well Dal said to try recording the final hook separately and while that would sound great, I think this one provides the humanizing effect. Something which you guys talked to me about in my thread. It feels good to the ear. |
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AshleyKaos
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Posted: 14 April 2015 at 6:55am |
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https://soundcloud.com/ashleykaos/ashleykaoss-song-5
All i gotta say is i worked my ass off on this shit ...it was hard as fuck but i tried really really hard to not rush and to be patient i did sections recording and voice xcersize b4.... wat u tuhink i know it aint perfect but its better Imo...holla |
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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Posted: 14 April 2015 at 6:15pm |
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Aight ash you know I got you. First off, huge improvement on your flow. Obviously not perfect but it was consistent through nearly the whole track. You sounded much more comfortable on this and came off as if you controlled the beat, rather than it controlling you. Content was decent, I didn't have any trouble understanding what you said so thats a good improvement over your older tracks. Mixing was a bit better, I don't remember what you said you're using to record and mix with but it's still got the sound like its recorded on a phone with the beat in the background of course that might be exactly what you're doing lol.
You definitely did better with the breath control, keep working on that it's super helpful once you get good at it. Now the hook, I like it and I think it fits, but I do have to keep it 100 with you. You sound like you do have a decent singing voice if you can practice it more. The first line, you sound good, and on key, but as the hook goes on, your voice loses pitch and goes off key and really distracts me from the beat. Do some studying on how to stay in key with the beat, and how to hold your pitch and the key you're singing in throughout the lines you are singing and you will do much better. Keep working at it I think you have somethin there and it was a nice change of pace to hear you singing a hook rather than rapping it. Overall, I definitely think this was a step up, not sure if you shouted me out or not lol i heard the word mission used a few times in different ways but nice work anyway ;), I'll let Dal or SS get to the nitty gritty critique stay up Ash!
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 14 April 2015 at 6:41pm |
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^That's great feed bro.
I'll feed you later Ash, been hella busy the last few days.
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 17 April 2015 at 8:14pm |
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Sorry to all, i've been gone for over 24 hours on a work business trip. I'll get you all good feed over the weekend and will be posting up some more shit. For now here's the rough beat for my new track that i'll be recording this weekend.
https://soundcloud.com/boom-bap-colective/as-the-raven-flies-instrumental-rough |
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Posted: 17 April 2015 at 11:10pm |
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Ok... Feed for Ash...
Firstly, I thought the beat choice was nice... Real grime style trap beats are one of my favorites... secondly, the flow was massively improved... content was ok, at times it was still hard to understand what you were saying but you've come a long way in terms of that so props... flow was massively improved, can't say that enough... I liked the simplicity of the hook too... with a better redention of it, sum harmonies and proper mixing it could be dope... My main issue with this outside of the roughness of it is the structure tho... you have to learn to format your songs better... I can't recall off top but in many situations you can use the beat to cheat... many a beat maker will have the tracks structured in a way where if u listen you can see where the hook goes, verse goes, bridge if any goes... I would usually say to hell with it seeing as my creativity makes me completely ignore structure at times but I think u would benefit from knowing how to properly write a song before creating your own structures... what I would recommend is listening to the beat before u start writing a d trying to break it down into a structure and then writing based on that... maybe start by creating a hook and going from there to the writing the verses |
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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 12:47pm |
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Been heaving technical difficulties with pretty much all of my existing work so made this beat for a new track.
https://soundcloud.com/boom-bap-colective/view-from-the-gutter-instrumental-mix |
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 8:22am |
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Stylz why have you been ignoring me ?
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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